2020-04-21 08:45:03 +00:00
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%title The Consequences of Dissonance
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:writing:fiction:novel:book:sexuality:romance:
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2020-04-21 08:55:03 +00:00
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**ABANDONED**
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2020-04-21 08:45:03 +00:00
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In which Maddy tried NaNoWriMo once.
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## Dramatis Personae:
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* Cory Rasmussen - main character - Andrew, a bit taller & skinnier
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* Jared - step dad - ???
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* ???Mr. Paulsen - highschool band teacher
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* Mark - Cory's RA - Shane w/ Lon's voice
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* Eric - other music major, future roommate - David fr choir
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* Joseph - art major, future roommate - Kiran but white
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* Jamen - art major, future roommate, future crush after girl - Kory, a little shorter
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* Kris(tal) Careen - girlfriend - Krystal from HS w/ Jill's hair/fashion
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* Erin - Kris' roommate, winds up with Eric - Shannon-ish
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* Dante - Kris' ex - sorta like Steve
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## Outline
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1. Exposition
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1. Introduction in the tonic
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* Cory moves th college
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* Conversation with mom in car on way to dorm - hopes/fears, homophobia
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* Distance from home
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* Money - past experiences - coming out
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* Highschool experiences
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* Recent money trouble in family
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2. First Theme in the tonic
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* First semester in college - first classes
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* Meets girl - MPDG
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3. Transition and modulation
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* Thanksgiving break
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* Mild strife with family
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4. Second theme in the dominant
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* Settling into school
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* Cultivating fears about relationship via thinking too much
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* Salvia doesn't help
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5. Codetta in the dominant
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* Finals week
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* Saying goodbye
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2. Development
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* ... (First half of semester)
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* Things get hairy
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* Expr with drugs
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* cut off financially
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* search for job
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* relationship troubles
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* Transition and modulation
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* Spring break
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* More strife with family
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3. Recapitulation
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1. First theme in the tonic
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* Things start to fall apart
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* Relationship ends
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* Bad trip
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* Money trouble
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* Winter break (via conversations)
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2. Transition without modulation
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* Finals week and moving into summer
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* Moving into cheap apartment with friends
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3. Second theme in the tonic
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* Talking with other people
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* Trying to find closure on relationship
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* Possibly beginning a new relationship (best friend++)
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4. Coda in the tonic
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* Letter from ex reprinted in entirety
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2020-04-21 08:55:03 +00:00
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## Scenes and status
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1. Exposition
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* [o] Scene: [[exposition/001]]
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2. Development
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3. Recapitulation
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