2. Write a cumulative sentence together: "Arriving late, ... to sit down at my desk ..." --- *Arriving late, after forgetting my coffee---now cold a fridge unplugged---in the rush of guilt from forgotten alarms, my clothes still damp having quickly grabbed them from the still-turning drying, I was desperate to escape the stifling conversation, prattling and monotone, of my dull-eyed coworkers, which was focused on weekend plans, how many inches of rain were expected, and the circuitous detail of their underdeveloped dreams about toe fungus.* --- have fun and be ridiculous to hunt for opportunities, then go back and revise, overwrite and pare down.
3. Notes on simile:
* simile has emotional and physical register
* more than a physical comparison.
* Bad: "his legs were thick like tree-trunks"
* Good: imbue with something much larger. "His legs were thick like he had dedicated himself to becoming a statue, some solid object people admired and pointed toward"