update from sparkleup

writing/post-self/neviim/index.md

@@ -144,10 +144,10 @@ Stolon talking with Tycho very informal and slangy, also a bit spotty on English
     * [O] [Ioan Bălan](ioan/002) --- True Name shows up - 1838
     * [O] [Tycho Brahe#Artemis](local/tycho/007) --- They work out a date, start making preparations e.g: building the DMZ out a bit, forks for who's going, senses how little input he will have but keeps to himself, letting #Tasker know to talk with Codrin back at house on prairie - 2174
 * [o] Experience - exchange of emissaries, discussions, knowledge share
-    * [o] [Codrin Bălan#Castor](local/codrin/007) --- divvying up tasks (e.g: #Emissaries talk about politics, society, history, #Castores talk about science, language, astronomy), forking, watching remote team head off, then forking and transiting DMZ border to welcome and orient emissaries. - 1490 (expand)
-    * [o] [Codrin Bălan#Artemis](remote/codrin/001) --- First entry into the meeting hall, a dome in the middle of a compound, disoriented, unable to fork, time feels weird, introduced and oriented, ey finds out about WAQ/AWNH switch, remembers what they were for, frown; AWNH and TN are kind of freaking out b/c time slipperiness feels like being lost. - 2403
-    * [o] [Ioan Bălan](ioan/003) --- May had a cry - 1804
-    * [o] [Codrin Bălan#Castor](local/codrin/008) --- starts out simply recording, Tycho too overwhelmed to speak, notices Turun Ko, discusses roles during a lull, TN frowns, Emissaries are set up with sandbox sim for downtime however they please; catches up with Tycho and Sarah Genet about how learning is going (hint: everyone's baffled) - 1875 (expand)
+    * [O] [Codrin Bălan#Castor](local/codrin/007) --- divvying up tasks (e.g: #Emissaries talk about politics, society, history, #Castores talk about science, language, astronomy), forking, watching remote team head off, then forking and transiting DMZ border to welcome and orient emissaries. - 1490 (expand)
+    * [O] [Codrin Bălan#Artemis](remote/codrin/001) --- First entry into the meeting hall, a dome in the middle of a compound, disoriented, unable to fork, time feels weird, introduced and oriented, ey finds out about WAQ/AWNH switch, remembers what they were for, frown; AWNH and TN are kind of freaking out b/c time slipperiness feels like being lost. - 2403
+    * [O] [Ioan Bălan](ioan/003) --- May had a cry - 1804
+    * [O] [Codrin Bălan#Castor](local/codrin/008) --- starts out simply recording, Tycho too overwhelmed to speak, notices Turun Ko, discusses roles during a lull, TN frowns, Emissaries are set up with sandbox sim for downtime however they please; catches up with Tycho and Sarah Genet about how learning is going (hint: everyone's baffled) - 1875 (expand)
     * [-] MERGED ABOVE <!--[Codrin Bălan#Artemis](remote/codrin/002) --- starts out simply recording, Tycho too overwhelmed to speak, notices Turun Ko, discusses roles during a lull, TN frowns-->
     * [o] [Tycho Brahe#Artemis](remote/tycho/001) --- overwhelmed at meeting them all, introductions go around, working out specialties and such, gets a bit excited talking about astronomy and how much there is to learn, TN frowns, though she's still struggling b/c lost-alike sensations Tycho learns about time from Turun Ka and that this is how they managed to work fast: modifying time rather than forking. They explain forking and merging in turn, compare with Artante's experience - 2195
     * [o] [Ioan Bălan](ioan/004) --- Ioan and May are super gay and sad - 1501

writing/post-self/neviim/local/codrin/008.md

@@ -1,6 +1,8 @@
 # Codrin Bălan#Castor --- 2346
 
-Codrin was pleased to see that some magic wrought by the Ansible engineers both here on Castor and their counterparts over on Artemis allowed the Artemisians to assume what must be their natural forms and that they weren't greeted by a gaggle of Douglases. Ey'd never seen Douglas, but it would have been unnerving and difficult to differentiate them. They'd even come wearing clothes --- those who wore them, at least, this Iska and Artante Diria --- which ey supposed they would appreciate. One of those benefits of System-to-System Ansibles that they'd enjoyed on their transit from L<sub>5</sub> to LVs, as well.
+    Convergence T-2 days, 5 hours, 21 minutes
+
+Codrin was pleased to see that some magic wrought by the Ansible engineers both here on Castor and their counterparts over on Artemis allowed the Artemisians to assume what must be their natural forms and that they weren't greeted by a gaggle of Douglases. Ey'd never seen Douglas, but it would have been unnerving and difficult to differentiate them. They'd even come wearing clothes --- those who wore them, at least, this Iska and Artante Diria --- which ey supposed they would appreciate. One of those benefits of System-to-System Ansibles that they'd enjoyed on their transit from Legrange to LVs, as well.
 
 So it was that they found themselves lined up opposite their counterparts across the table from each other, exchanging their formal greetings.
 
@@ -78,7 +80,7 @@ Tycho grinned, nodded. "Apologies, that will be my question, then."
 
 "I ask," Stolon said. "How launched vehicle? We see also another."
 
-"A station --- a construct, as you say --- rotating with the Castor and Pollux LVs at the end of long launch arms, released us using tangential velocity, then photon sails, Hall Effect engines, and gravity assists on our way out of the system."
+"A station --- a construct, as you say --- rotating with the Castor and Pollux LVs at the end of long launch arms, released us at tangential velocity, then photon sails, Hall Effect engines, and gravity assists on our way out of the system."
 
 "You move not so fast, *ka?* Conserve fuel?" They chattered their teeth again. "Sorry sorry, will ask again soon."
 
@@ -110,7 +112,7 @@ Why Ask Questions rested a hand gently on Sarah's forearm. Both she and True Nam
 
 "Yes, in time," the Odist said. "For my question, I would like to know how you manage linguistic drift."
 
-Iska straightened up. "Our common tongue began primarily that of secondrace, of my race, but has incorporated many aspects of other languages. Languages within each race, including for pure *Nanon*, the basis of secondrace, are uncontrolled, but common tongue is managed via central authority."
+Iska straightened up. "Our common tongue began primarily that of secondrace, of my race, but has incorporated many aspects of other languages. Languages within each race, including for pure *Nanon*, the basis of our common tongue, are uncontrolled, but common tongue is managed via central authority."
 
 "Thank you, representative Iska."
 

writing/post-self/neviim/remote/tycho/001.md

@@ -1,4 +1,6 @@
-# Tycho Brahe#Emissary --- 2346
+# Tycho Brahe#Artemis --- 2346
+
+    Convergence T-2 days, 5 hours, 12 minutes
 
 Tycho found himself focusing most on True Name after the long spate of introductions.