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@ -5,13 +5,13 @@ It took a moment before Carter was able to collect herself again after pulling b
And normal this was not.
She pulled out her phone and, perhaps in a vain attempt to appear calm, tapped away on it while pacing out of the room. She had toured the facility often enough that she had an idea of where the lost would be kept, even if she didn't know for sure that she would be able to find them there.
She pulled out her phone and, perhaps in a vain attempt to appear calm, tapped away on it while walking out of the room. She had toured the facility often enough that she had an idea of where the lost would be kept, even if she didn't know for sure that she would be able to find them there.
> Caitlin, Johansson
> Johansson, Caitlin,
>
> At UMC, things got complicated. May be out of contact after this. Please stay safe. Stay away from DDR. Stay away from RJ.
>
> C
> cr
She had already begun to put her phone back in her pocket before the faint ping along her implants notified her of a new message.
@ -23,13 +23,13 @@ Carter began quick-walking, doing her best to maintain the appearance that she b
And the ruse, if ruse it were, worked well enough to get her up to the second floor and onto the hall where RJ was being kept. A slow hall. A quiet hall, where none of the patients could talk or move. An empty hall. A nurse's station with a lone nurse sitting behind a monitor.
Empty except for two chairs in front of one of the rooms.
Empty, except for two chairs in front of one of the rooms.
The only occupied chairs along the entire hall were occupied with suits. Suits stuffed to the brim with frowning men. Men frowning at her.
*Well, shit.*
There would be no backing up without increased culpability. She had been preempted --- and why not? Dr Carter Ramirez, researcher in the lost, was meant to be here, right?
There would be no backing up without increased culpability. She had been preempted. And why not? Dr Carter Ramirez, researcher in the lost, was meant to be here, right?
All she could do, all she could think to do, was nod to them politely and head to the nurse's station. "Good, uh...good afternoon."
@ -41,7 +41,7 @@ The nurse's frown deepened. "You're expected. The gentlemen down the hall are he
*Well...shit.*
No way around it. Carter thanked the nurse and, moving with as much calm as she could muster, started down the hall. Both of the suits stood, buttoned their jackets, and stood at attention, waiting for Carter to come to them. A show of power.
No way around it. Carter thanked the nurse and, moving with as much calm as she could muster, started down the hall. Both of the suits stood, buttoned their jackets, and waited at attention, watching Carter come to them. A show of power.
A show interrupted by Johannson.
@ -51,7 +51,7 @@ Nonplussed, the suits turned toward Johansson. "Sir, we are not--"
"Won't take a moment, please. Just need a bit of privacy. Dr Ramirez, head on in.I'm sure we can all talk in a moment."
Unsure if it was confusion or Johansson's convincing act that drew her forward, she simply nodded and continued into the room. Caitlin, she assumed, sat on another chair next to the bed. And in the best must have been RJ. Short, slight, dusty blonde hair swept back out of eir face by a simple hairband, eyes taped shut, nasal intubation tube taped to eir cheek. Still. Completely still.
Unsure if it was confusion or Johansson's convincing act that drew her forward, she simply nodded and continued into the room. Caitlin, she assumed, sat on another chair next to the bed. And in the bed itself must have been RJ. Short, slight, dusty blonde hair swept back out of eir face by a simple hairband, eyes taped shut, nasal intubation tube taped to eir cheek. Still. Completely still.
"Dr Ramirez?" Caitlin said.
@ -69,12 +69,12 @@ The sudden intensity seemed to startle Caitlin. She sat up straighter in her cha
"Anyone connected to the lost, anyone connected to me is at risk of getting lost, too."
The tech frowned. "I understand, I guess. Why are you here?"
"You mean...intentionally? Not an accident?" The tech frowned. "I understand, I guess. Why are you here, then?"
Carter ground her palms against her eyes and shook her head. "I don't know. Running from those guys, I guess, trying to reduce my guilt." She considered expanding on what Prakash had said, on Prakash himself, then decided against it. If he was helping her, that would simply be throwing him under the bus. "Figured if I came here, it would only be an ethics violation or something. Pretty vain hope."
Carter ground her palms against her eyes and shook her head. "I don't know. Running from those guys, I guess, trying to reduce my guilt." She considered expanding on what Prakash had said, on Prakash himself, then decided against it. If he was indeed helping her, that would simply be throwing him under the bus. "Figured if I came here, it would only be an ethics violation or something. Pretty vain hope."
"Maybe," Caitlin hazarded. "I guess it's nice to meet you. We heard about you from Sasha."
"Maybe," Caitlin hazarded. "I guess it's nice to meet you. I heard about you from the boss and Sasha."
It was Carter's turn to sit up straight. "Sasha! Shit. Sasha's lost now, too. That's why I'm saying don't delve in. Got an idea, though! I need a...oh good, there's one already here! I need the mirror rig."
"Sasha! Shit. Sasha's lost now, too. That's why I'm saying don't delve in. Got an idea, though! I need a...oh good, there's one already here! I need the mirror rig."
She was shouting. Didn't know how to do anything but. If she was worried about attracting attention, though, she needn't have: similar hollering echoed down the hallway.

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* [X] Chapter: [Carter 001](Carter/001-b) --- gets a hunch on the train
* [X] Chapter: [Ioan 002](Ioan/002) --- Ioan meets Dear
* [X] Chapter: [RJ 004](RJ/004-b) --- RJ gets lost
3. [O] Act II
3. [X] Act II
* [X] Chapter: [Carter 002](Carter/002) --- Sanders vs Carter, Carter's space
* [X] Chapter: [RJ 005](RJ/005-a) --- Investigating auditorium
* [X] Chapter: [Ioan 003](Ioan/003-a) --- AES message, the puzzle begins
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* [X] Chapter: [Ioan 006-b](Ioan/006-b) --- Story of gathering Odists, perhaps flashback to/story from Dear about clade's formation?
* [X] Chapter: [Carter 009](Carter/009) --- Carter calls out, Prakash warns, works with Sasha and Debarre, Sasha gets lost, seen by Carter gives hint to mirror rig
* [X] Chapter: [RJ 014](RJ/014) --- explores memory instead of will, finds deck in eir exo, then way more, struggling to forget
* [O] Chapter: [Carter 010](Carter/010) --- Messages Caitlin and Johansson, heads to RJ, threatened by mooks
* [X] Chapter: [Carter 010](Carter/010) --- Messages Caitlin and Johansson, heads to RJ, threatened by mooks
4. [O] Act III
* [O] Chapter: [Ioan 007](Ioan/007) --- Mustering the Odists
* [O] Chapter: [RJ 015](RJ/015) --- deduces meaning of getting loss