From 06a6a40fca96ea35b410f50c8b4f51f42404008c Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Madison Scott-Clary <makyo@drab-makyo.com>
Date: Mon, 25 Dec 2023 21:50:05 -0800
Subject: [PATCH] update from sparkleup

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-<!-- Do a scene with Pointillist and build a story around this. -->
+<!-- Do a scene with Pointillist and build a story around this.
+
+We talked about this in the tub:
+
+* If Muse sent this to Beholden and *then* went to go watch the firework, Beholden would have had time to go interrupt her and bring Pointillist with.
+* They went to go try and stop her, got there partway through the firework
+* Muse pretty angry about this, crying, saying they were not supposed to be there
+* They talk for an hour or two, but Muse convinces them (Pointillist first) that this is the right thing for her to do.
+* Beholden forks beforehand, lets down-tree take the merge and try to decide whether or not to incorporate it.
+* She decides not to because, at that moment, she's worried it'll overwhelm who she is and change the dynamic she's worked on so hard with Pointillist.
+-->
 > Beholden To The Heat Of The Lamps,
 > 
 > It has been seven days. One week, I promised myself. I would wait one week while I watched the System limp back to life. I would wait a week and see what all was being done, what could be done to save the lost.