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 # Le Rêve streets
 
+Le Rêve may have been small at one point, but this neighborhood has grown in time. Members of the Ode clade ­— mostly the fifth stanza, sure,but hardly the fifth stanza alone — mingle freely with members of Au Lieu Du Rêve, living in houses, town homes, and apartment complexes.%r%rThe neighborhood is built around a central street which takes the form of a large 'U'. Up near the opening of the U sits a back entrance into one of Au Lieu Du Rêve's theatres, while along the outside of it sit many of the domiciles, some of these right up against the street and some set around cul-de-sacs. In the center is a common community space, complete with park, rec center, and a lovely little lake.
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 ## Park
 
-The center of La Rêve is largely a common area. This is the third place of the neighborhood, where anyone might gather and where community may be found. Down near the south edge is a park, full of grass and meandering paths, benches of all sorts — the lovely wooden kind with outdoor cushions on them as well as the quaintly uncomfortable wrought-iron ones for whom such is attractive. Trees are scattered about, singly or in comfortable groves. Also placed almost at random through the park are grills meant for community cookouts.%r%rPlopped in the center is a playground, complete with swings, jungle gym, rope bridge, and slide. While this may have begun as Motes's, it has become a part of the community space for all, and one might just as often find the swings filled with couples having heart-to-heart conversations and the jungle gym topped by lonely adults looking up to the stars and dreaming as one finds it all but covered by little ones zooming about.
+The center of Le Rêve is largely a common area. This is the third place of the neighborhood, where anyone might gather and where community may be found. Down near the south edge is a park, full of grass and meandering paths, benches of all sorts — the lovely wooden kind with outdoor cushions on them as well as the quaintly uncomfortable wrought-iron ones for whom such is attractive. Trees are scattered about, singly or in comfortable groves. Also placed almost at random through the park are grills meant for community cookouts.%r%rPlopped in the center is a playground, complete with swings, jungle gym, rope bridge, and slide. While this may have begun as Motes's, it has become a part of the community space for all, and one might just as often find the swings filled with couples having heart-to-heart conversations and the jungle gym topped by lonely adults looking up to the stars and dreaming as one finds it all but covered by little ones zooming about.
 
 ## Rec center
 
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 ## Lake
 
-La Rêve's central area includes a lake, because why would it not? More of a placid pond, perhaps, lined with various shores: there is a sandy shore for those who might treat it as a beach, a muddy shore for those who like wandering along the edge of a lake in a pensive mood, a rocky shore well populated by flat stones ripe for the skipping, and one whole corner which seems dedicated to cattails and reeds, a meandering wooden walkway winding between them with a secluded platform right in the center with a few benches for quiet conversations.%r%rNotably absent? Mosquitoes.
+Le Rêve's central area includes a lake, because why would it not? More of a placid pond, perhaps, lined with various shores: there is a sandy shore for those who might treat it as a beach, a muddy shore for those who like wandering along the edge of a lake in a pensive mood, a rocky shore well populated by flat stones ripe for the skipping, and one whole corner which seems dedicated to cattails and reeds, a meandering wooden walkway winding between them with a secluded platform right in the center with a few benches for quiet conversations.%r%rNotably absent? Mosquitoes.
 
 ## House on the Hill