diff --git a/writing/post-self/neviim/ioan/004.md b/writing/post-self/neviim/ioan/004.md
index e5ca5eac..207d0295 100644
--- a/writing/post-self/neviim/ioan/004.md
+++ b/writing/post-self/neviim/ioan/004.md
@@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
 # Ioan Bălan --- 2346
 
-    Convergence T-7 days, 19 hours, 31 minutes
-    (transmission delay: 7.23 days)
+> *Convergence T-minus 1 day, 19 hours, 31 minutes*  
+> *(transmission delay: 7 days, 5 hours, 31 minutes)*
 
 May made it through dinner --- Ioan was heartened to see that she'd actually eaten all of the chicken soup ey'd made --- before padding off to a beanbag to curl up. She kept up a sleepy conversation for a few minutes while Ioan cleaned, but even that tapered off to silence. When next ey looked back, the skunk was asleep.
 
diff --git a/writing/post-self/neviim/local/codrin/008.md b/writing/post-self/neviim/local/codrin/008.md
index 76b9f938..31913f8f 100644
--- a/writing/post-self/neviim/local/codrin/008.md
+++ b/writing/post-self/neviim/local/codrin/008.md
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 # Codrin Bălan#Castor --- 2346
 
-    Convergence T-3 days, 5 hours, 21 minutes
+> *Convergence T-minus 3 days, 5 hours, 21 minutes*
 
 Codrin was pleased to see that some magic wrought by the Ansible engineers both here on Castor and their counterparts over on Artemis allowed the Artemisians to assume what must be their natural forms and that they weren't greeted by a gaggle of Douglases. Ey'd never seen Douglas, but it would have been unnerving and difficult to differentiate them. They'd even come wearing clothes --- those who wore them, at least, this Iska and Artante Diria --- which ey supposed they would appreciate. One of those benefits of System-to-System Ansibles that they'd enjoyed on their transit from Lagrange to LVs, as well.