diff --git a/writing/3/unknown-things/iyov/1-framing-devices.tex b/writing/3/unknown-things/iyov/1-framing-devices.tex
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@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@ Job puts forward a note of interrogation; God answers with a note of exclamation
 \parencite{intro-to-job}
 \end{quote}
 
-All stories are perforce interpolations within real events, or at least the initial imaginings of fictional events. The story is not written the events happen. All stories, all conversations. They all occur at least at one layer of remove and at least a fraction of a second too late.
+All stories are perforce interpolations within real events, or at least the initial imaginings of fictional events. The story is not written as the events happen. All stories, all conversations. They all occur at least at one layer of remove and at least a fraction of a second too late.
 
 Stories are as bound to time as we are, and all we can do is steal back a little bit of memory through however many words. All we can do with these memories pinned in place is regard them from a second level of distance and make guesses. Guesses as to meaning, guesses as to content, guesses as to the context in which those memories might have led to their origin.