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@@ -391,7 +391,7 @@ A slow minute passes as the fisher meditates. At last, he opens his eyes and loo
 
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-When Zita comes up from the village, bearing an armload of flatbread and a small basket full of spice cakes for Lyut, he had since ceased his conversation with Týw and had ceased meditating by laying on the ground, and had instead settled for sitting cross-legged in the entrance to his cave looking out. Zita sang as she walked, as she had for the last ten festival weeks that this had been her duty, and so Lyut hears her before he saw her.
+When Zita comes up from the village, bearing an armload of flatbread and a small basket full of spice cakes for Lyut, he had since ceased his conversation with me and had ceased meditating by laying on the ground, and had instead settled for sitting cross-legged in the entrance to his cave looking out. Zita sang as she walked, as she had for the last ten festival weeks that this had been her duty, and so Lyut hears her before he saw her.
 
 He debates for thirty heartbeats whether or not he is willing to keep his eyes open for her arrival. He debates whether or not he is willing to see, to perceive someone with senses other than those he had been born with.
 
@@ -401,7 +401,7 @@ Lyut makes up his mind and closes his eyes when he hears Zita rounding the curve
 
 Lyut stays silent.
 
-"As you wish, faithful, but know: while some miracles are private and must be held close to the heart, not all of them, and to hide this one would be to live a lie before me and before the village."
+"As you wish, faithful, but know: while some miracles are private and must be held close to the heart, not all of them are, and to hide this one would be to live a lie before me and before the village."
 
 "I am not brave enough."