update from sparkleup

writing/post-self/marsh/index.md

@@ -33,17 +33,16 @@ NB: It's frankly astonishing how few cats there are in this story. Fix that.
 * [O] Part 2 --- Phys-side is being a little sketchy about what happened, turns out there was a reset and a lot of work behind the scenes after a coordinated attack between phys- and sys-side, taking the form of a generalized weapon that wiped out most of the System. Large chunks of it were restored after a lot of work and help from the Artemisians, but not total success --- virus loophole was fixed (incl singular attacks), but no guarantee there won't be another work-around, plans to split the System into smaller pieces, move some of them to Earth/Sun Lagrange points
     * [O] [007](007) --- Dry Grass loops Reed & co into discussion with phys-side admin and engineers, Günay made point and admin pushed to the side, Huddle to talk about why they're being so cagey --- 5747
     * [O] [008](008) --- Dinner and talking with Dry Grass, Cress, and Tule about feelings, Reed catching feelings --- 3324
-    * [O] INTERLUDE: Millwright
-    * [-] 009 --- (MERGED DOWN)
+    * [O] INTERLUDE: Naturtiums
     * [O] [010](010) --- Clade representatives form a group, contact chill phys-side systech, learning even more about both what happened WRT CPV bomb and collectives, plus how phys-side is seeing things, various changes to the System, AWNH and Jonas Fa are into knife play --- 5877
     * [o] [011](011) --- Meeting with member of The System Consortium, who is a member of a conservative collective, learning more about why the System was bombed --- 2346
-    * [o] [012](012) --- Visiting the morgue, funeral for Marsh, fight with Lily, who is reacting to grief with anger. --- 3345
+    * [O] [012](012) --- Visiting the morgue, funeral for Marsh, fight with Lily, who is reacting to grief with anger. --- 3345
 * [O] Part 3 --- The ramifications, both global and personal (but mostly personal) --- a lot of talk among the Marshans, their partners, and a chill phys-side systech --- looking into trying to reconstruct Marsh by cross-tree merging Reed, Lily, and Cress --- it doesn't work, so it turns into coming to terms with letting go of the past
     * [O] [013](013) --- Dry Grass mourns, Reed catches Cress and Tule up with regards to System changes, cross-tree merges --- 2395
     * [O] [014](014) --- Reed and Hanne talking, Reed admits to starting to grieve now that things are calming down, expresses doubts about reconstruction --- 1775
     * [O] [015](015) --- Date with Dry Grass, talking about reconstruction --- 2002
     * [O] [016](016) --- Discussing social changes both phys- and sys-side, improvements on the table, someone digging into Artemisian archives, Reed decides to go through with cross-tree merge --- 3975
-    * [O] INTERLUDE: Nasturtiums
+    * [O] INTERLUDE: Columbines
     * [o] [017](017) --- It doesn't work, there is only them, no Marsh, Vos gets *very mad*, clade admits it's time to start grieving proper --- 3619
 * [o] Epilogue --- Life after
     * [o] [018](018) --- ~8 months later, a letter from Marsh#Castor or #Pollux expressing grief, coming to terms with letting go of the past, conversation 2 with A Finger Pointing (and other Odists) about being a clade without a root, cross-tree merges for reconciliation, bring up point from early 017