From 1745e16df8e27382eb19b2d8e22bcafc0a255bfe Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Madison Scott-Clary Date: Sun, 2 Jan 2022 19:50:01 -0600 Subject: [PATCH] update from sparkleup --- writing/post-self/neviim/remote/codrin/001.md | 2 +- writing/post-self/neviim/remote/codrin/008.md | 2 +- 2 files changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/writing/post-self/neviim/remote/codrin/001.md b/writing/post-self/neviim/remote/codrin/001.md index 1682c9f9..8a280dd3 100644 --- a/writing/post-self/neviim/remote/codrin/001.md +++ b/writing/post-self/neviim/remote/codrin/001.md @@ -118,7 +118,7 @@ The firstracer bowed, tucking its chin close to its chest. "There is no need to Artante Diria bowed at the waist, a gesture so easy and recognizable that Codrin, Tycho, and Sarah all reciprocated more out of habit than anything. -"Welcome. You may call me Artante. This way, please," she said, gesturing with a hand. +"Welcome. You may call me representative Artante Diria. This way, please," she said, gesturing with a hand. Codrin hesitated, watching as something happened to bring Why Ask Questions back into sync with common time. Her shout completed and then turned into a low moan as she crumpled to the ground, retching. For the first time since ey'd met Michelle nearly four decades ago, ey watched the dueling identities of a mind split. Skunk and human battled battled for primacy even as True Name helped her cocladist to her feet. diff --git a/writing/post-self/neviim/remote/codrin/008.md b/writing/post-self/neviim/remote/codrin/008.md index e3c5ce3a..e6a05b33 100644 --- a/writing/post-self/neviim/remote/codrin/008.md +++ b/writing/post-self/neviim/remote/codrin/008.md @@ -130,7 +130,7 @@ There was so much to take in here, but on further examination, it all made quite Artante shook her head. "They are having a different discussion. It is not the time for them to have the conversation of steps and checklists." -Sarah frowned. "Should we not tell her about this discussion?" +Sarah frowned. "Should we tell her about this discussion?" After a hesitation, the fourtracer replied, "There are steps on the checklist for if you do and if you do not."