From 199ed31c6ed658551215506fc62e486870e35d69 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Madison Scott-Clary Date: Wed, 13 Oct 2021 20:05:05 -0700 Subject: [PATCH] update from sparkleup --- .../post-self/toledot/launch/launch/Codrin-pollux/005.md | 6 +++--- 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-) diff --git a/writing/post-self/toledot/launch/launch/Codrin-pollux/005.md b/writing/post-self/toledot/launch/launch/Codrin-pollux/005.md index 570c0513..0e7ce790 100644 --- a/writing/post-self/toledot/launch/launch/Codrin-pollux/005.md +++ b/writing/post-self/toledot/launch/launch/Codrin-pollux/005.md @@ -14,7 +14,7 @@ Ey was surprised when ey had been contacted by her, rather than the other way ar It came as a letter. An actual, honest-to-goodness letter, slipped under eir door (which is how the sim decided to interpret it), written in a rounded hand on yellow legal pad paper. -Ey spent nearly five minutes just staring that the letter, turning it over in eir hands, inspecting the writing, the ink (shitty ballpoint), the creases. Ey couldn't make either heads or tails of it. It was incredibly Odist while at the same time being totally unique. +Ey spent nearly five minutes just staring that the letter, turning it over in eir hands, inspecting the writing, the ink (shitty ballpoint, ey had noted with distaste), the creases. Ey couldn't make either heads or tails of it. It was incredibly Odist while at the same time being totally unique. When ey showed it to Dear, the fox rolled its eyes and handed it back. @@ -30,11 +30,11 @@ When ey showed it to Dear, the fox rolled its eyes and handed it back. Codrin refolded the note and tucked it into a pocket in eir tunic. "You sound less than fond of her." -The fox shook its head. *"I like her quite a bit, actually. I like her because she is good at making others like her."* +The fox shook its head. *"Not at all. I like her quite a bit. I like her because she is good at making others like her."* "Aren't you all, though?" Dear's partner called from the couch. -*"Yes, but she is particularly good at it, and that is why she is a shithead."* It grinned at Codrin and took eir hand in its paw to give the back of it an affectionate lick. *"You do not need to be careful, though. She is harmless to any one individual, and any harm that she might cause to a group will be welcomed with open arms and all of the love in the world."* +*"Yes, but she is particularly good at it, and that is why she is a shithead."* It grinned at Codrin and took eir hand in its paw to give the back of it an affectionate lick. *"You do not need to be careful, though. She is harmless to any one individual, and any harm that she might cause to a group will be welcomed with open arms and all of the love in the world. Think of her as the mirror image of May Then My Name, perhaps."* "Sounds charismatic."