From 1aac7c9f786e486d0786360b98a767ff128d92d3 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Madison Scott-Clary Date: Thu, 23 May 2024 17:59:34 -0700 Subject: [PATCH] update from sparkleup --- writing/post-self/idumea/index.md | 4 ++++ 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+) diff --git a/writing/post-self/idumea/index.md b/writing/post-self/idumea/index.md index 95dc4db2..a66c5060 100644 --- a/writing/post-self/idumea/index.md +++ b/writing/post-self/idumea/index.md @@ -59,3 +59,7 @@ End Of Endings — 2403 / Rye — 2409 * [ ] [006](006) --- The Woman muses on the clade and her past, the ways she was taken advantage of, the attack, narrator talking about obsessions and balance / Honest John and Gideon the cat * [ ] [007](007) --- The Woman begins to earnestly wish for an escape from the cycle, and Her Friend has feelings, narrator talking about urges to quit (both storytelling and suicide) / Comes to life after a wish * [.] [008](008) --- The Woman talks with Dry Grass with her idea, who mentions Serene, they talk and she turns into a tree on a sidewalk in the city sim, unclear if she quits, the narrator struggles with how they feel about this, modern vs postmodern, earnest vs ironic, subversion vs playing straight, living vs not, devolves into repeated phrases as Rye overflows / Carved from wood + +## Notes + +* For 008 — "Where before The Woman and Her Lover, as the poet says, shared their oranges and limes, where they gave their kisses, where they lay on the grass and beach, now the woman lays underground and they share nothing, giving silence for silence.