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* Connection between stillness and unbecoming (group A)
* The Rabbit Chaser and the child
* Unbecoming conversation with her friend (group A to new chapter?)
* [.] [008](008) --- The Woman talks with Dry Grass with her idea, who mentions Serene, they talk and she turns into a tree on a sidewalk in the city sim, unclear if she quits, the narrator struggles with how they feel about this, modern vs postmodern, earnest vs ironic, subversion vs playing straight, living vs not, devolves into repeated phrases as Rye overflows / Carved from wood
* [o] [008](008) --- The Woman talks with Dry Grass with her idea, who mentions Serene, they talk and she turns into a tree on a sidewalk in the city sim, unclear if she quits, the narrator struggles with how they feel about this, modern vs postmodern, earnest vs ironic, subversion vs playing straight, living vs not, devolves into repeated phrases as Rye overflows / Carved from wood
## Notes
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* [o] Meets the dog on her way to see Motes to ask about changing herself
* [o] Remembers/learns of Serene
* [o] Conversation with her friend about knowing what to do
* [ ] Meets the blue fairy (shown via conversation below)
* [ ] The blue fairy meets with those the woman has spoken with (show via Rye)
* [ ] The blue fairy helps her turn into a tree, sends everyone a message stating such, also that she has pulled strings to leave the woman's clade entry in place but grayed out (used for ultra-locked-down ACLs) whether or not she is still alive, leaving behind surety for something unknown, never wrote her story
* [o] Meets the blue fairy (shown via conversation below)
* [o] The blue fairy meets with those the woman has spoken with (show via Rye)
* [o] The blue fairy helps her turn into a tree, sends everyone a message stating such, also that she has pulled strings to leave the woman's clade entry in place but grayed out (used for ultra-locked-down ACLs) whether or not she is still alive, leaving behind surety for something unknown, never wrote her story
* In 007 Motes mentions a switch; this is her playing around; and behind the scenes either she or Pointillist are making the change.
* For 008 — Where before The Woman and Her Lover, as the poet says, shared their oranges and limes, where they gave their kisses, where they lay on the grass and beach, now the woman lays underground and they share nothing, giving silence for silence.
* She didn't try love, not explicitly, and that is a tragedy, for so many loved her