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@@ -106,10 +106,10 @@ Nearing the 200th anniversary of System secession from humanity, the System and
     * [ ] [Launch: launch-side: Codrin#Castor](launch/launch/Codrin-castor/008) - Interviews True Name for the last time, learning that True Name/her stanza and Jonas orchestrated the launch from the beginning, have been in contact across sys/launch (irreversible), comes home to Dear, sighs, gets hugs, comfort that the ends aren't bad, even if the means are.
     * [ ] [Secession: sys-side: True Name](secession/sys/True-Name/008) - Council meets, celebrates; after, meets with Jonas to discuss ways to ensure stability going forward (growth = irreversibility)
     * [ ] [Launch: sys-side: Ioan](launch/sys/Ioan/011) - Ioan interviews True Name, finds out she's still everywhere w/ Jonas, steering system, difference between conservatives/liberals is scale of manipulation, liberals think too small (see quote below)
-    * [ ] [Secession: sys-side: Michelle](secession/sys/Michelle/004) - Acknowledges that the clade has gotten out of hand, hints that she basically died when forking, irreversible, goes largely into seclusion to keep herself calm/stable, talking only to May Then My Name and a few others
+    * [ ] [Secession: sys-side: Michelle](secession/sys/Michelle/004) - Acknowledges a few years after dissolution of Council that the clade has gotten out of hand, hints that she basically died when forking, irreversible, goes largely into seclusion to keep herself calm/stable, talking only to May Then My Name and a few others
     * [ ] [Launch: sys-side: Ioan](launch/sys/Ioan/012) - kind of freaks out at May b/c like finding out your in-laws-ish are the illuminati, though ey comes around because a) she explains need for control as trauma response, and b) tells myth in progress, about how the gods created the world in an attempt to shape it to their will, but instead became impersonal forces in the face of absolute independence; Ioan and May get together, discuss irreversibility of that act, since Ioan didn't fork like Codrin
     * [ ] [Launch: launch-side: Codrin#Pollux](launch/launch/Codrin-pollux/008) - Interviews Dear about just how much influence the Ode clade had/still has, what's next (death = irreversible, but Dear doesn't make Codrin cry in this LV)
-    * [ ] [Launch: sys-side: Ioan](launch/sys/Ioan/013) -if the clade exists to explore/exploit need as trauma reaction, what do each of the stanzas do (True Name's: political machinations; Praiseworthy's: artistic machinations; Qoheleth's: history/memory machinations), liberal side (not always later lines) has grown more earnest, rebelling against need to control.
+    * [ ] [Launch: sys-side: Ioan](launch/sys/Ioan/013) -if the clade exists to explore/exploit need as trauma responses, what do each of the stanzas do (True Name's: political machinations; Praiseworthy's: artistic machinations; Qoheleth's: history/memory machinations), liberal side (not always later lines) has grown more earnest, rebelling against need to control, discusses future with May.
     * [ ] [Launch: phys-side: Douglas](launch/phys/Douglas/009) - Douglas uploads on one year anniversary, talks about necessity of not being on launches, met by Ioan and May in dandelion sim (as TN met Yared), learns about Michelle/Ode Clade via how they got their names. (learning = irreversibility)
 * [ ] Epilogue
     * [ ] [Launch: launch-side: Codrin#Castor](launch/launch/Codrin-castor/009) - Castor launch's Dreamer Module picks up a signal from another similar ship (actually impersonal POV, though Codrin breaks in occasionally? Ey talked w/ astronomer), Dreamer Module turns out to also contain detailed instructions on how to grow a human. Last bit of irreversibility: can't un-meet a new species (~20 years after launch, into Oort cloud)