diff --git a/diary/2021-06-07-rawr-day-2.md b/diary/2021-06-07-rawr-day-2.md
index 3634fb4c..4dfcddf3 100644
--- a/diary/2021-06-07-rawr-day-2.md
+++ b/diary/2021-06-07-rawr-day-2.md
@@ -43,7 +43,7 @@
         * If it works for you to power through, go ahead and do it
         * The more you edit and revise, the easier it gets to see them in a first draft and edit them out as you write
         * As you write, your story will change (esp longer works), so if you e.g: need to go back and set something up earlier and your momentum can take it, go ahead
-        * Need to figure out that momentum question: if you can do something without getting stuck in the mud.
+        * Need to figure out that momentum question: if you can do something :!without getting stuck in the mud.
         * An option: "Write the stupid version first" - let your skills/muscle memory carry you.
         * The first draft can also be an exploratory process. You'll learn about it as you write.
         * Can be easier to edit out
@@ -61,4 +61,7 @@
         * Change is necessary to a story, but doesn't have to be conflict (a list in *Steering the Craft*); a sex scene can explore change
 * A coping skill only helps if it's functional; if these help, then bonus
 
+# Readings
 
+* "Guide for Working Breeds":
+* "A Soft White Damn":