diff --git a/writing/middle-notes/foraging.md b/writing/middle-notes/foraging.md new file mode 100644 index 00000000..c83142e1 --- /dev/null +++ b/writing/middle-notes/foraging.md @@ -0,0 +1,3 @@ +(fishing after incense) + +(foraging after fishing) diff --git a/writing/middle-notes/index.md b/writing/middle-notes/index.md index 51614bc1..88a38ebc 100644 --- a/writing/middle-notes/index.md +++ b/writing/middle-notes/index.md @@ -3,7 +3,7 @@ Idea: The terror of a sudden addition of a new, unknowable sense. -Story of a blind-from-birth character in a solipsist world, only one, makes incense and lives a life of prayer, foraging and fishing. Some animal - marten, maybe? "He sat in the sun and was greatly warmed, and by this he had always surmised that his fur was of a particular quality that the sun was drawn to, for there were parts of his surroundings that rejected and repelled the sun." Spend at least a few thousand words on day to day life and small challenges. +Story of a blind-from-birth character in a solipsist world, only one, makes incense and lives a life of prayer, foraging and fishing. Some animal - fisher, maybe? "He sat in the sun and was greatly warmed, and by this he had always surmised that his fur was of a particular quality that the sun was drawn to, for there were parts of his surroundings that rejected and repelled the sun." Spend at least a few thousand words on day to day life and small challenges. Conflict: a fae character (presence?) gives him sight - the narrator? "I gave him sight"? That makes the opening a series of observances. @@ -26,7 +26,7 @@ Target length: 30-40k words * On Lyut's life * [On making incense](making-incense) - * On foraging and fishing - * On going to bed hungry and subsisting on the smoke of prayer - * On cycles, days, sun, heat + * [On foraging and fishing](foraging) + * [On going to bed hungry and subsisting on the smoke of prayer](hunger) + * [On cycles, days, weeks/Zita, sun, heat, seasons](cycles-heat) * Confounding with sight