diff --git a/writing/3/terrifying/engagement.md b/writing/3/terrifying/engagement.md index 4f55073d..53ed4110 100644 --- a/writing/3/terrifying/engagement.md +++ b/writing/3/terrifying/engagement.md @@ -74,7 +74,7 @@ And what of the amount of time spent living into those personalities? When I sto > has spring, summer, and autumn in just a few > minutes) — fall off and bump on the grave;\footnote{\cite[51]{duino}} -She did not, but had she died, what then? I would be unwhole. I would have a rotting edge. I would have tape myself together around this missing self. +She did not, but had she died, what then? I would be unwhole. I would have a rotting edge. I would have to tape myself together around this missing self. > What will I do, sky? Lake, what? Bluebird, iris, ultramarine, how can there be more when this is done?\footnote{\cite[165]{timewar}}