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 * [O] Conversation --- Ioan's been hanging out with TN, May is actively working on letting go, and has gotten to the point of being cordial, polite, occasionally kind
     * [O] CHAPTER Ioan 2349
         * [O] [Coffee date - Nov 2349](001) --- Ioan and TN get coffee, which they've been doing about once a month or so for a few years now.
-        * [O] [May's monologue, Ioan's critique](002) --- May's writing a monologue, so she delivers what she has to Ioan who offers a critique. It's about her own history, so they get to talking about her past.
+        * [O] [May's monologue, Ioan's critique](002) --- May's writing a monologue, so she delivers what she has to Ioan who offers a critique. It's about her own history, so they get to talking about her past
         * [O] [Coffee date - Dec 2349](003) --- Ioan talks about adapting *Perils* for stage, gets to talking with TN about the conservatives' side, realizes TN#Castor never told her about the Name business
         * [O] [Meet Cute](004) --- Ioan and May talk about how much they wind up talking about TN; Ioan, on a whim, heads out for a walk at Arrowhead, conversation with TN about how much they wind up talking about May; ey draws conclusions about how much they think still think about each other
     * [O] CHAPTER Debarre? 2350