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@@ -22,7 +22,7 @@ It's difficult for me to describe the ways in which she's changed. She's overwor
 
 And yet from what you two have said, other than her experience on Artemis, she's still going strong on both the LVs.
 
-I don't really know what to do with this information, honestly. I keep thinking about things I could have said or questions I could have asked, but it always gets muddled up in my head given her similarities to May. I've spent so long May that seeing someone as similar to her as True Name is in distress, yet be unable to comfort in the same ways I might has me rudderless.
+I don't really know what to do with this information, honestly. I keep thinking about things I could have said or questions I could have asked, but it always gets muddled up in my head given her similarities to May. I've spent so long with May that seeing someone as similar to her as True Name is in distress, yet be unable to comfort in the same ways I might has me rudderless.
 
 Either way, I've set up another meeting with her now that convergence news has settled into a more steady stream, so I guess we'll see where that leads.
 
@@ -36,7 +36,7 @@ Anyway, all that to say that True Name's having a rough time here, and I'm hopin
 
 **Codrin Bălan#Castor Individual-Eyes-Only Material**
 
-I'm worried about you. Your last letter led to a few conversations between May and I about individuation, but also about the topic of separation in more general terms. I understand that you two did your best to diverge as quickly as possible, and I can't even imagine that.
+I'm also worried about you. Your last letter led to a few conversations between May and I about individuation, but also about the topic of separation in more general terms. I understand that you two did your best to diverge as quickly as possible, and I can't even imagine that.
 
 I know that when you became Codrin, that was not something that I'd foreseen, and despite the surface similarities, this feels different. It's a new thing for us, I think. You two were borne out of the changes that the Odists wrought on us, but Sorina was borne out of changes coming from within.