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@@ -264,4 +264,4 @@ What Right Have I burst into tears. She did not cry prettily, but very few peopl
 
 "I am the worst, yes," she said, voice still quiet and calm. "But that is why I am choosing to believe that the premonition was true and why I am choosing to believe that she did find joy, or peace, or at least nothingness and freedom."
 
-"They both deserve to be together. I hope that that is where No Longer Myself is now. Where all of those lost are," If I Dream eked out. "I hope your dreams were true, in the end."
+"They both deserve to be together. I hope that that is what No Longer Myself has obtained. What all of those lost have," If I Dream eked out. "I hope your dreams were true, in the end."