From 357fe6ebfe2e159ed9dcd1360dbd3898011594bd Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Madison Scott-Clary Date: Tue, 14 Nov 2023 16:08:30 -0800 Subject: [PATCH] update from sparkleup --- writing/post-self/marsh/006.md | 5 ++--- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-) diff --git a/writing/post-self/marsh/006.md b/writing/post-self/marsh/006.md index 44c11379..22d22902 100644 --- a/writing/post-self/marsh/006.md +++ b/writing/post-self/marsh/006.md @@ -211,11 +211,10 @@ Sniffling, Cress nodded. "I've been worried about the same. All of my friends, D Jess, who had been fairly quiet up until that point, asked, "'Lost saga'? Like, all that stuff about people being disappeared? Didn't they all die?" -"Oh, heavens no," she said, chuckling. "We were among the lost. *Michelle* was lost. That is part of why she was so fucked up." +"Oh, heavens no," she said, chuckling. "We were among the lost. *Michelle* was lost. That is the trauma Warmth In Fire spoke about. That is part of why she was so fucked up." -"And why we are so fucking weird," Hold My Name said. "*You* certainly are," she added ruffling Warmth In Fire's perpetually mussed up mane. +"And, like it said, why we are so fucking weird," Hold My Name said. "*You* certainly are," she added ruffling Warmth In Fire's perpetually mussed up mane. -((Warmth speaks)) It snapped eir teeth at her, grinning wickedly. Hold My Name barely flinched, instead rolling her eyes. "You see the shit I put up with?"