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@@ -136,9 +136,13 @@ They nodded and, hearing the call for help in putting the anti-matter engine to
 
 They frowned and toggled to command on their own mic and murmured, *"Heard,"* in return before smiling once more to the rest of the engineering team and walking station-north to epistemics.
 
-As ey walked, ey pulled out eir PDA and tapped to open the glimmer monitor.
+As they walked, they pulled out their PDA and tapped to open the glimmer monitor.
+
+389Ψ.
+
+They stopped walking and started jogging. They worked to keep their expression level, doing their best to look merely busy and not panicked. After all, seeing a captain run through the halls wasn't *un*common...
+
 
-389Ψ
 (Glimmer keeps rising)
 
 (Mantis critted, but revived, talks of hearing lots of mites)