From 420c185e6d5b10af32c14a1d6edc2e6fc1e94a41 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Madison Scott-Clary Date: Mon, 15 Feb 2021 23:00:03 -0800 Subject: [PATCH] update from sparkleup --- writing/hand-of-god.md | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/writing/hand-of-god.md b/writing/hand-of-god.md index f35130e2..26240455 100644 --- a/writing/hand-of-god.md +++ b/writing/hand-of-god.md @@ -33,7 +33,7 @@ The botanist jerked upright. She had been crouched. Or hunched. A near feral war "No. Maybe. I don't know." -The physicist frowned, peered out into the trees in the direction the botanist had been looking. "I thought you might have heard something. You froze and started looking over there, over to the outcropping." +The physicist frowned, peered out into the trees in the direction the botanist had been looking. "I thought you might have heard something. You froze and started looking over there--" He gestured with his chin. "--over to the outcropping." She didn't remember which way she had been facing. She knew that she had turned to face the physicist, though.