From 42ed8f06fc98663ba149de3efefd94c0ae6a10c3 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Madison Scott-Clary Date: Fri, 8 Apr 2022 23:10:11 -0700 Subject: [PATCH] update from sparkleup --- writing/post-self/mitzvot/004.md | 4 ++-- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/writing/post-self/mitzvot/004.md b/writing/post-self/mitzvot/004.md index f44705f2..55a4689d 100644 --- a/writing/post-self/mitzvot/004.md +++ b/writing/post-self/mitzvot/004.md @@ -70,7 +70,7 @@ She laughed and dotted her nose against eir cheek. "Excellent." Ey nodded. "It was pretty weird." -"For both of us, yes. I like being what I am! Short, chubby, soft, furry...it is just that these are all things that are disarming to a great many people," she said, poking at her own belly. "Even skunks, despite their reputation for smelling bad, are more often seen as bumbling, stupid creatures." +"For both of us, yes. I like being what I am! Short, chubby, soft, furry," she said, poking at her own belly. "It is just that these are all things that are disarming to a great many people. Even skunks, despite their reputation for smelling bad, are more often seen as bumbling, stupid creatures." "I wouldn't call you stupid, May. Bumbling, though..." @@ -118,7 +118,7 @@ The skunk laughed and shook her head. "Just an expression." Ey nodded and tightened eir arm around her, kissing between her ears. "Same, I think. Thanks for reminding me, though. I should probably get up and get that started. -They both slid out of the bed to complete their morning routines: Ioan to make another pot of coffee and prepare breakfast while May went through her grooming routine, then eating, a shower for em while she worked on her monologue. +They both slid out of the bed to complete their morning tasks: Ioan to make another pot of coffee and prepare breakfast while May went through her grooming routine, then eating, a shower for em while she worked on her monologue. The dinner itself wasn't onerous, a stew of pork --- ey'd been raised on a version with lamb, which May hadn't liked --- tomatoes, and mushrooms in a garlicky, paprika-filled gravy. Still, it benefited from a longer cooking time, so ey began that after eir shower and set it to simmering.