diff --git a/writing/post-self/toledot/index.md b/writing/post-self/toledot/index.md
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@@ -25,11 +25,11 @@ The secession of the system and launch of the extra-solar system.
         * Codrin Balan
             * Launch-side historian
         * Ioan Balan
-            * Sys-side historian and launch coordinator
+            * Sys-side historian
         * Dear, Also, The Tree That Was Felled (Dear)
             * Launch-side storyteller (new job title)
         * May Then My Name Die With Me (May Then My Name)
-            * Sys-side storyteller
+            * Sys-side storyteller and launch coordinator
     * Offline
         * Douglas Hadje
             * Phys-side System tech, launch coordinator
@@ -57,8 +57,8 @@ The secession of the system and launch of the extra-solar system.
         * Sys-side
             * Ioan A is actually kind of eager to not be taking part in next huge thing, and to be reading and compiling Codrin's letters from launch side.
             * Ioan B interviews locals who specifically did not go
-            * Ioan C acts as launch coordinator
-            * May Then Thy Name co-authors the story with Ioan as a permanent-yet-evolving mythology, specifically changing small details to make it grandiose, turn it into a new mythology
+            * Ioan C acts as early system historian
+            * May Then Thy Name, her role as launch coordinator diminished post-launch, co-authors the story with Ioan as a permanent-yet-evolving mythology, specifically changing small details to make it grandiose, turn it into a new mythology. She also provides the historical background.
         * Launch-side
             * Codrin, Dear, and its partner head off in their sim, having decided not to leave forks behind
             * Codrin interviewing those who have decided to come with (both seeds are identical in crew and capacity, but will obv diverge further and further apart with time).