diff --git a/writing/post-self/neviim/local/codrin/005.md b/writing/post-self/neviim/local/codrin/005.md index ba99d3f3..730158f8 100644 --- a/writing/post-self/neviim/local/codrin/005.md +++ b/writing/post-self/neviim/local/codrin/005.md @@ -2,11 +2,11 @@ Convergence T-20 days, 18 hours, 41 minutes -It was not at all surprising that dinner at home was far less stressful than the dinner with the Odists out in Tycho's observatory. While the conversation throughout the meal had been nothing but pleasant, the food delightful, and the location and single candle a stunning setting for a dinner, a tension nonetheless hung above the table at all times. While Sarah had appeared relaxed and True Name and Answers Will Not Help seemed to earnestly enjoy the evening, Tycho had been hovering on the edge of terror, Dear had seemed to have put on a mask of pleasantness that involved choosing its words most carefully, and Codrin had felt hypervigilant throughout. +It was not at all surprising that dinner at home was far less stressful than the dinner with the Odists out in Tycho's observatory. While the conversation throughout the meal had been nothing but pleasant, the food delightful, and the location and single candle a stunning setting for a dinner, a tension had nonetheless hung above the table at all times. While Sarah had appeared relaxed and True Name and Answers Will Not Help seemed to earnestly enjoy the evening, Tycho had been hovering on the edge of terror, Dear had seemed to have put on a mask of pleasantness that involved choosing its words most carefully, and Codrin had felt hypervigilant throughout. This was confirmed when they returned home and the instance of Dear which had accompanied em to the dinner sagged, exhausted, and then quit. The instance of Dear which had remained behind, when confronted with the onslaught of memories, sighed and simply shook its head. None of the triad seemed at all interested in discussing the dinner. -It was Dear's partner who had suggested the smaller party for the next night. While they hadn't explicitly mentioned that it would be a counter to the party the night previous, it was certainly implied. Something to cleanse their palates, as well as have further time for Codrin, Tycho, and Sarah to interact before they were to go on their journey. All three --- four, including Dear --- had immediately agreed. +It was Dear's partner who had suggested the smaller party for the next night. While they hadn't explicitly mentioned that it would be a counter to the other party, it was certainly implied. Something to cleanse their palates, as well as to give further time for Codrin, Tycho, and Sarah to interact before they were to go on their journey. All three --- four, including Dear --- had immediately agreed. So it was that they sat around the table, there in the modern house on the prairie, sharing coffee and desserts and pleasant, easy conversation. @@ -14,7 +14,7 @@ So it was that they sat around the table, there in the modern house on the prair The fox nodded. *"Michelle was a high-school theatre teacher. I suppose you can see why it is that we are so dramatic."* -She laughed. "Well, alright. Some things carry through even two hundred years later, I guess." +She laughed. "Some things carry through even two hundred years later, I guess." *"Nearly two hundred fifty, yes. I would complain about being old, but when one is functionally immortal, bitching loses its savor."* @@ -30,7 +30,7 @@ Still laughing, Tycho said, "It's probably no surprise that I was an astronomer "How'd that even work?" Sarah asked. "When I was there, we could barely see any stars." -"All space-based stuff. Besides, radio telescopes don't need quite so dark of skies. Amateur astronomers were the hardest hit. They often had to drive way the hell up into the mountains, and even then, wait for winter when logging season was over. I taught a few classes out there and volunteered at a dark-sky site." +"All space-based stuff. Besides, radio telescopes don't need quite so dark of skies. Amateur astronomers were the hardest hit. They often had to drive way the hell up into the mountains, and even then, wait for winter when logging season was over. I taught, too, and a few classes were out there. I volunteered at a dark-sky site." "That makes your sim make a lot more sense." @@ -68,7 +68,7 @@ He trailed off, staring up into space with a blank expression, then shook his he Shrugs all around. -"Uh, sorry," he said, pausing a moment longer, and then sitting up straighter when a few folded sheets of notebook paper slid down to the table in front of him, neatly missing both coffee and half-eaten tiramisu. "Tycho#Artemis sent a list of questions to the Artemisians today. I think they weren't expecting the reply to come for a day or two, but it showed up after only five minutes, minus transit. Weird..." +"Uh, sorry," he said, pausing a moment longer, and then sat up straighter when a few folded sheets of notebook paper slid down to the table in front of him, neatly missing both coffee and half-eaten tiramisu. "Tycho#Artemis sent a list of questions to the Artemisians today. I think they weren't expecting the reply to come for a day or two, but it showed up after only five minutes, minus transit. Weird..." *"What sort of questions are we talking about?"* @@ -86,7 +86,7 @@ He shrugged. "There are specific numbers. They add up to...five thousand, three Dear laughed. *"It depends on how sane they were before they started and how their system is structured. Probably, though."* -"Well, I guess we'll find out soon enough. Let's see...there were a few questions about how the races interact. It sounds like they have several common areas available, but there are still enclaves of the different races that mostly keep to themselves. Apparently most speak a form of secondrace's primary language because firstrace was...uh, hmm. They say electronic. I'm not sure what that means. Maybe they were robots of some sort? AIs? They didn't need to talk with words. All races except firstrace still have several different languages of their own which I suppose they speak at home and in their own sims." +"Well, I guess we'll find out soon enough. Let's see...there were a few questions about how the races interact. It sounds like they have several common areas available, but there are still enclaves of the different races that mostly keep to themselves. Apparently most speak a form of secondrace's primary language because firstrace was...uh, hmm. They say electronic. I'm not sure what that means. Maybe they were robots of some sort? AIs? They didn't need to talk with words. All races except firstrace still have several different languages of their own which they speak at home and in their own sims." Codrin nodded. Ey had summoned a pen and notebook and was already taking notes. "Will they be teaching us any of them?" @@ -112,7 +112,7 @@ There were a few blips of other foxes behind Dear, startling Tycho. The fox flinched back as though slapped, its ears laid flat and its brow furrowed. -"They provided additional information, though. They say that fourthrace had the same concept of forking that we appear to, so they understand our questions around dissolution strategies and clade structures. #Artemis also asked about their naming system, and apparently Turun Ka and Turun Ko are from something akin to a clade that existed before the voyage began. Something from when they were electronic but not on their system. Instead of forking, they seem to have individual, fine-grained control over time. This is how they responded so quickly, apparently, they slowed time way down so that they had as much as they wanted to write their response. They ask if this will be accommodated during the talks and there's a note from True Name here saying that, even if it were possible, she's going to answer no. Tycho said she looked upset." +"They provided additional information, though. They say that fourthrace had the same concept of forking that we appear to, so they understand our questions around dissolution strategies and clade structures. #Artemis also asked about their naming system, and apparently Turun Ka and Turun Ko are from something akin to a clade that existed before the voyage began. Something from when they were electronic but not on their system. Instead of forking, they have individual, fine-grained control over time. This is how they responded so quickly, apparently: they slowed time way down so that they had as much as they wanted to write their response. They ask if this will be accommodated during the talks and there's a note from True Name here saying that, even if it were possible, she's going to answer no. Tycho said she looked upset." *"Unpleasant business,"* Dear muttered darkly. *"Unpleasant to an extreme."* @@ -144,7 +144,7 @@ If Sarah had been interested before, she was nearly staring holes into Tycho now A silence fell over the table while they digested this, each in their own way. -Codrin sipped eir coffee while ey thought. *The correct question* made it sound as though they had reached some sort of milestone, perhaps, especially when taken with *we are eager to meet you.* It made it sound as though they'd completed a mission by asking that. +Codrin sipped eir coffee while ey thought. *The correct question* made it sound as though they had reached some sort of milestone, perhaps, especially when taken with *we are eager to meet you.* It made it sound as though humanity had completed a mission by asking that. And yet, there wasn't an answer to the question given, if Tycho was right about the message. They didn't say yes or no, they didn't say what about. They simply seemed to be smiling through the page, and ey couldn't tell whether that smile was one of satisfaction, encouragement, or pride. diff --git a/writing/post-self/neviim/local/tycho/006.md b/writing/post-self/neviim/local/tycho/006.md index d510df34..9574ade5 100644 --- a/writing/post-self/neviim/local/tycho/006.md +++ b/writing/post-self/neviim/local/tycho/006.md @@ -1,5 +1,7 @@ # Tycho Brahe#Artemis --- 2346 + Convergence T-19 days, 4 hours, 33 minutes + The sight of the dissemination of the news of Artemis was beautiful in much the same way that a ballet was. This was, he supposed, largely due to the well-coordinated dance of both messages flying back and forth and countless Odists and Jonases moving back in forth in the largest of the conference rooms he'd seen yet. He knew that there were sims where one could fly. Flying, after all, fit well within the realm of something that any number of people could consensually imagine together. They held a perennial appeal to a certain type of person, of which he was not one. A fear of heights combined with a certain neurotic work ethic led him to stay away from those sims in general. If it was fun and not also productive, he felt little need to engage. It may have been unhealthy, it may not have been, but he had never stuck around anyone long enough to hear either way.