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Madison Scott-Clary 2022-09-06 13:30:06 -07:00
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@ -40,7 +40,7 @@ She'd occasionally gotten upset at em, usually when ey'd not picked up on some c
All of the other times, though, had come from within. Whatever dire emotions that dwelt beneath the chipper, goofy, sarcastic, and delightfully earnest layer that made up the most of her would peek through and a little spark of something more profound and inexplicable would come over her.
Ey frowned down to eir coffee, and considered whether ey should start laying in supplies for her overflowing. If this was the first sign, though, ey at least had some time yet.
Ey frowned down to eir coffee and considered whether ey should start laying in supplies in case she asked em to leave should waves of uncontrollable emotion take her, that 'overflowing' that seemed to affect most --- if not all --- of the clade. If this was the first sign, though, ey at least had some time yet.
"Mx. Bălan?"
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Still frowning, she nodded.
"It was all bound up in some clade-eyes only thoughts," ey hastened to add, hoping that the slight untruth would be enough. "Eir worries about Dear, Death Itself...but I don't want to say anymore."
"It was all bound up in some clade-eyes-only thoughts," ey hastened to add, hoping that the slight untruth would be enough. "Eir worries about Dear, Death Itself...but I don't want to say any more."
That seemed to have been enough, as the tenseness that had been building in her shoulders relaxed, though her frown remained. "Of course, yes, I did not mean to press. My apologies."