From 4908a8a9e9d8d0582a5752a2f2b25532d88f8774 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Madison Scott-Clary Date: Mon, 14 Mar 2022 22:28:27 -0700 Subject: [PATCH] update from sparkleup --- writing/post-self/neviim/ioan/004.md | 4 ++-- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/writing/post-self/neviim/ioan/004.md b/writing/post-self/neviim/ioan/004.md index 3f754b82..22fed332 100644 --- a/writing/post-self/neviim/ioan/004.md +++ b/writing/post-self/neviim/ioan/004.md @@ -19,7 +19,7 @@ Once there, ey helped her out of her clothes, unsteady as she was, and then tuck Ey nodded, forking off a copy to finish cleaning up and taking notes. After a few minutes of eir own bedtime routine, ey slipped into bed with her. Ey was certainly tired enough, ey realized. -And so now, back at home, back in their own bed, alone together, May and Ioan had the conversation ey felt they truly needed. They talked quietly, almost *sotto voce*, now that they were alone, now that it was dark and comfortable and they were no longer surrounded by the loud, raucous colors of Douglas's field. They shared their kisses, their small touches, they reaffirmed, in so many small, unspoken ways, their love for each other, and they talked. +And so now, back at home, back in their own bed, alone together, May and Ioan had the conversation ey felt they truly needed. They talked quietly, almost *sotto voce*, now that it was dark and comfortable and they were no longer surrounded by the loud, raucous colors of Douglas's field. They shared their kisses, their small touches. They reaffirmed, in so many small, unspoken ways, their love for each other, and they talked. "What do you think they are learning?" May murmured, nose-tip poking up against Ioan's chin. @@ -91,7 +91,7 @@ They lay like that in the quiet and the dark. Eir fork apparently finished up wi The skunk poked her nose against eir collarbone. "Mm?" She sounded half asleep. -"I really can't lose you. You know that right?" Ey felt her stiffen in eir arms, continued, "I said ages ago that I'm not built for a life with death in it. That's why I'm here. That's why I uploaded in the first place, to get away from that." +"I really can't lose you. You know that right?" Ey felt her tense in eir arms, but continued, "I said ages ago that I'm not built for a life with death in it. That's why I'm here. That's why I uploaded in the first place, to get away from that." "Ioan," she said, voice hoarse. "I already-"