diff --git a/writing/workshop-packet/lesson-plan.md b/writing/workshop-packet/lesson-plan.md index 6b8714ae..caf446c3 100644 --- a/writing/workshop-packet/lesson-plan.md +++ b/writing/workshop-packet/lesson-plan.md @@ -26,7 +26,7 @@ Ensuring that you feel like a safe person to talk to in the instance of somethin ### Applications - +Applications may be made through something as simple as a Google Form, sold through a service such as Gumroad, or even set up through a more formal process on something like Submittable. ### Submissions @@ -173,7 +173,7 @@ Ensuring that you feel like a safe person to talk to in the instance of somethin * Subjective: emotional impact, plot effectiveness, evocative descriptions * Reading exercise: * Pick one of these two categories to pay attention to first and read, then read for the second - * Critique tomorrow, but preview: we're not tearing a text apart, we're asking it questions: + * Workshop tomorrow, but preview: we're not tearing a text apart, we're asking it questions: * How did we feel the plot worked? Was there a structure? Could we follow it? * What was told? What was left out? How did (not) knowing make us feel? * What type of language usage was there? Word choice? Style?