diff --git a/writing/post-self/what-right-have-I/index.md b/writing/post-self/what-right-have-I/index.md
index efbd1daf..5a04bf53 100644
--- a/writing/post-self/what-right-have-I/index.md
+++ b/writing/post-self/what-right-have-I/index.md
@@ -10,7 +10,8 @@ Themes:
 * Community sys-side
 * Judaism sys-side/post-Israel
 
-Strand 1: WHRI tasked with outreach to older clades, both within her community and within the clade
+Strand 1: WHRI tasked with outreach to older clades, both within her community and within the clade, as one who is a member of the community (subtext, later text, being that it's because she's so weird, it comes off as visibly struggling with age)
+Strand 2: 
 
 ## Epigraph