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@ -356,17 +356,17 @@ When May finally allows them back, Sasha requests some time to talk with just he
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~~May merges down~~
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: True Name agrees to let May merge down with her for the first time in 245 years. They kneel together on a bed, facing each other while True Name struggles to accept that many memories, May trying to be comforting as she can, while Ioan watches from the side. I like this because the rest of the book is more focused on emotions and how they tie in with memories, which is way more sedate than assassination attempts (plus, double the Odists that could be cut into by the letters).
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Zacharias is a piece of shit
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Zacharias is a piece of shit ([source](mitzvot/026))
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: True Name has been spending in the woods around the lake with her newfound desire for solitude, getting away from May and Ioan. What none of them realize, however, is that the sim isn't as private as expected, and one of Jonas's cronies (and True Name's ex), Zacharias, comes to visit and taunt her. True Name panics and messages May and Ioan, who arrive to confront Zacharias. May tries to taunt him in turn and he gets frustrated enough that he slaps her across the face. There's quite a bit to the scene, some of which may make for cover material.
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~~Ioan talks with Jonas~~
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: twice --- once on the balcony of eir home with Jonas sitting on a deck chair and Ioan standing nearby (it's winter, so probably snowy out), once in a pub. Both times, Jonas is insufferably smug and Ioan is frustrated/upset.
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Physical affection??? How even??¿
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Physical affection??? How even??¿ ([source](mitzvot/030), [source](mitzvot/033), [source](mitzvot/037))
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: After the merge, True Name has picked up May's affectionate streak and gets all cozy on Ioan a couple of times (a few times as Sasha; see the characters section below). The mood is kiiind of cuddly but also super awkward because neither of them know what to do about it at all given a) their fraught history together with her as True Name, but also b) her having May's memories of being in a relationship with Ioan
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~~May's monolgue~~
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: May gives a monologue at one point, looking drunken and melancholic in a bar-setting on a stage
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Ioan and TN get coffee
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Ioan and TN get coffee ([source](mitzvot/008))
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: To go with #1 but less actiony, True Name and Ioan meeting for coffee that day. Ioan's eir usual natty self, but True Name's a real mess. They usually meet at a coffee shop which has an L-shaped couch in the corner, and they each sit on a branch of it to work.
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