diff --git a/writing/post-self/toledot/secession/sys/Michelle/001.md b/writing/post-self/toledot/secession/sys/Michelle/001.md index 5d615a69..6b2b48a7 100644 --- a/writing/post-self/toledot/secession/sys/Michelle/001.md +++ b/writing/post-self/toledot/secession/sys/Michelle/001.md @@ -68,7 +68,7 @@ The reasons for the forks became clear, now, and over the next five minutes --- She held up her hand when there the mergers had completed down to the doubled-versions of the nine first lines and one second line (for Qoheleth had been a first, Michelle remembered/Sasha remembered) standing before her. -"We have a task for each of you. One last task." And she walked down the line/she walked down the line, leaning close to whisper into each of their ears, whether they were skunk or human or something new and different, what she wanted them to accomplish. +"We have a task for each of you who will remain. One last task." And she walked down the line/she walked down the line, leaning close to whisper into each of their ears, whether they were skunk or human or something new and different, what she wanted them to accomplish. "Now," she said.