From 5807ba20119c965b790b4ef13215271fd7b90b1e Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Madison Scott-Clary Date: Tue, 1 Dec 2020 14:30:03 -0800 Subject: [PATCH] update from sparkleup --- writing/poetry/pale-she.md | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/writing/poetry/pale-she.md b/writing/poetry/pale-she.md index 3f748c5e..68f6758c 100644 --- a/writing/poetry/pale-she.md +++ b/writing/poetry/pale-she.md @@ -10,7 +10,7 @@ Thoughts like leaves fall slow, hesitate, drift, rustle, sigh. Frost-rimed remnants rot. -Some paler she asks: +Some paler she asks: do you see the sky through me? Do I frame its mien?