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 ## Story
 
-Finding the appropriate balance of pleasantly drunk and  
+Finding the appropriate balance between pleasantly and unpleasantly drunk was a skill that one had to practice, Ioan had long known. Ey'd only had the chance to experience drunkenness one time before ey'd uploaded, so ey had little to compare the experience to other than the occasional exploration or socially obligatory drink before meeting the Odists.
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+Hell, even after meeting them, but certainly before getting to know A Finger Pointing.