diff --git a/writing/post-self/index.md b/writing/post-self/index.md index cab260fa..42335f21 100644 --- a/writing/post-self/index.md +++ b/writing/post-self/index.md @@ -9,7 +9,7 @@ In which Maddy mushes together some stories into a post-human romp of ~~a book~~ * [X] Novel: [Qoheleth](qoheleth/index) * [X] Novella: [Gallery Exhibition](gallery-exhibition) * [X] Novel: [Toledot](toledot/index) -* [O] Novel: [Nevi'im](neviim/index) +* [X] Novel: [Nevi'im](neviim/index) * [.] Novel: [Mitzvot (WT)](mitzvot/index) ## Post-Self diff --git a/writing/post-self/mitzvot/004.md b/writing/post-self/mitzvot/004.md index 8a10d603..f44705f2 100644 --- a/writing/post-self/mitzvot/004.md +++ b/writing/post-self/mitzvot/004.md @@ -46,11 +46,11 @@ Lifting her snout, she licked at eir shoulder, getting a laugh out of em. "Where Ey pet along her back, thinking. "I don't know. I've only really had extensive interactions with skunks, foxes, and weasels. Maybe a squirrel?" -She rolled off eir front and sat up eagerly. "A squirrel? Really? Would you be one of those fancy red ones with the ear tufts and outrageous tales or one of the gray ones that were all over where I grew up?" +She rolled off eir front and sat up eagerly. "A squirrel? Really? Would you be one of those fancy red ones with the ear tufts and outrageous tails or one of the gray ones that were all over where I grew up?" A quick query of the perisystem archive gave em a good idea of what each might look like. "The red ones sound really ostentatious. I don't know if I could pull that off." -She retrieved her coffee mug from em and settled in beside em instead. "Yes, but the tail," she whined. "Come on, my dear. You would simply *have* to be a red squirrel. You dress all fancy, still, even." +She retrieved her coffee mug from em and settled in beside em instead. "Yes, but the *tail,*" she whined. "Come on, my dear. You would simply *have* to be a red squirrel. You dress all fancy, still, even." "Are they bigger than skunk tails?" diff --git a/writing/post-self/mitzvot/index.md b/writing/post-self/mitzvot/index.md index db8321af..d097dd66 100644 --- a/writing/post-self/mitzvot/index.md +++ b/writing/post-self/mitzvot/index.md @@ -39,7 +39,7 @@ Wherein True Name and May reconcile, and we deal with the problem of the ownersh * [o] [Something innocent](012) --- TN moves in with Ioan and May through attached townhouse, trying to figure out how to work this so there's no cat^H^H^Hskunkfights * [.] [Bone Town](013) --- TN talks with May about Jonas in CoS. Later, she comes up with the idea to merge down (needs to be filled out) * [ ] CHAPTER Debarre 2350 - * [ ] [May's Wallow 1]() --- May's in communication with EW, wants him to merge down, he and Debarre discuss this. + * [ ] [May's Wallow 1](014) --- May's in communication with EW, wants him to merge down, he and Debarre discuss this. * [ ] [May comes over]() --- May later comes over and there's further discussion * [.] CHAPTER Ioan 2350 * [ ] [TN's Wallow 1]() --- TN moping about how things have wound up re: her calling