diff --git a/writing/post-self/neviim/remote/codrin/007.md b/writing/post-self/neviim/remote/codrin/007.md index 0c184aa1..331209f6 100644 --- a/writing/post-self/neviim/remote/codrin/007.md +++ b/writing/post-self/neviim/remote/codrin/007.md @@ -114,7 +114,7 @@ Ey guided her into her room and helped her to sit down on the edge of her bed, a "You heard nothing today, Mx. Bălan," she mumbled, quiet enough that ey had to lean closer to hear. "I know what you thought you heard, but you heard nothing. Do not tell anyone. Do not tell Ioan, and certainly do not tell any others within the Ode clade." -Ey took a half step back from the skunk. So hoarse and clouded was her voice that ey couldn't piece together her mood. "I...is that a suggestion or a demand? I'm sorry, True Name. I know how much it means, I just--" +Ey took a half step back from the skunk. So hoarse and clouded was her voice that ey couldn't piece together her mood. "I...is that a suggestion or a threat? I'm sorry, True Name. I know how much it means, I just--" She smiled weakly and shook her head before laying out on her side, rubbing her arm and wincing. "It is a request from me to you, Codrin, from my clade to yours. Across our two entangled clades." The smile faded as she added, "Not...a request. A plea."