From 5edae9df163e6bebc692f5acef86a30e47c0676e Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Madison Scott-Clary Date: Thu, 23 Sep 2021 16:35:04 -0700 Subject: [PATCH] update from sparkleup --- writing/post-self/neviim/index.md | 4 +++- 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/writing/post-self/neviim/index.md b/writing/post-self/neviim/index.md index ac4c97af..8ba8dea1 100644 --- a/writing/post-self/neviim/index.md +++ b/writing/post-self/neviim/index.md @@ -22,10 +22,12 @@ Prophet aspect: Aliens have been at this longer, start giving advice, etc, which * General plot: * Agree to fall into trajectories that aren't diverging so quickly (using attitude jets and angling solar sail, though Castor is still moving slower and has little chance to catch up/aliens don't want to slow down) * Aliens upload into dmz to meet with Tycho, Codrin, Answers Will Not Help, and True Name. Lots of discussions. - * Tangents throughout: what were the effects of the history/mythology project? * Tycho, Codrin, Why Ask Questions, and True Name upload into similar DMZ on the remote ship. Lots of discussions * Begins with a lot of learning about each other * Shifts to gentle nudges this way and that to information sent between the two ships and between DMZ and System as a whole * Shifts from there to gentle nudges back and forth on each others' societies * Climax??? Maybe there is a subversive faction of both humans and aliens who figures out how to break through the DMZ on each? * Denouement: Who's upset? Who's happy? Why? What's next? +* Notes: + * [ ] Codrin not sure how ey feels about always being the amanuensis for everything big. Not tired, really, but frustrated? + * [ ] Tangents/interludes throughout about how The History and Mythos affected launch-side society, maybe also sys-side via transmissions