From 5f5d74e53df86dd3aa75e538767e5ecce1b00d41 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Madison Scott-Clary Date: Wed, 17 Nov 2021 23:15:05 -0800 Subject: [PATCH] update from sparkleup --- writing/post-self/toledot/launch/launch/Codrin-castor/008.md | 2 +- writing/post-self/toledot/launch/launch/Codrin-castor/009.md | 2 +- 2 files changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/writing/post-self/toledot/launch/launch/Codrin-castor/008.md b/writing/post-self/toledot/launch/launch/Codrin-castor/008.md index 3c18d32e..b188fe5d 100644 --- a/writing/post-self/toledot/launch/launch/Codrin-castor/008.md +++ b/writing/post-self/toledot/launch/launch/Codrin-castor/008.md @@ -10,7 +10,7 @@ So ey waited, ey read, and ey calmed down, and then ey scheduled eir interview. The response came five minutes later, a simple ping of acknowledgement followed by a calm suggestion that immediately would be as good a time as any. -This time, when Codrin stepped into True Name's apartment, ey was greeted by the skunk standing where she had the last two interviews, and this time, her expression was one of calm curiosity, rather that that initial warmth and its following coldness." +This time, when Codrin stepped into True Name's apartment, ey was greeted by the skunk standing where she had the last two interviews, and this time, her expression was one of calm curiosity, rather than that initial warmth and its following coldness." "Mx. Bălan, it is nice to see you again." diff --git a/writing/post-self/toledot/launch/launch/Codrin-castor/009.md b/writing/post-self/toledot/launch/launch/Codrin-castor/009.md index 15124fa2..4c5b4fcc 100644 --- a/writing/post-self/toledot/launch/launch/Codrin-castor/009.md +++ b/writing/post-self/toledot/launch/launch/Codrin-castor/009.md @@ -36,7 +36,7 @@ Three light hours, though! That was too close, much too close. And fast! He didn > We understand the mechanism by which we may meet. We have similar. Instructions to follow. -And this is why Tycho was scared shitless and too excited to breathe. This meant that they had somehow learned the information thoroughly enough to pick up on the final set of instructions, the information about the Ansible and about how to build a build a mind accurately enough to send through the Ansible. +And this is why Tycho was scared shitless and too excited to breathe. This meant that they had somehow learned the information thoroughly enough to pick up on the final set of instructions, the information about the Ansible and about how to build a mind accurately enough to send through the Ansible. > Awaiting consent.