update from sparkleup

writing/sawtooth/limerent-object/index.md

@@ -70,15 +70,15 @@ Epigraph: εκαρδίωσας ημάς ενί από οφθαλμών σου ε
         * [o] [31](31) --- Lunch 1: first lunch, actually chatting
         * [o] [51](51) --- Lunch 2: lent
         * [o] [72](72) --- Lunch 3: post-recital
-5. [.] [No way #2](beats/05-no-way-2)
+5. [o] [No way #2](beats/05-no-way-2)
     * [o] A: Limerence is egodystonic
         * [o] [61](61) --- confession
         * [o] [71](71) --- egodystonic attraction
         * [o] [70](70)? --- talk with jeremy
-    * [ ] B: Reaffirm left, even if faith = very important
-        * [ ] [Crowds 1](no-way-2-1) --- have to write presentation
-        * [ ] [Notes](no-way-2-2) --- outlining presentation
-        * [ ] [Crowds 2](no-way-2-3) --- presentation (also includes notes)
+    * [.] B: Reaffirm left, even if faith = very important
+        * [o] [Crowds + presentation](no-way-2-1) --- have to write presentation
+        * [o] [Notes](no-way-2-2) --- outlining presentation
+        * [ ] [Essay + conversation with Kay abt it](no-way-2-3) --- presentation (also includes notes)
 6. [.] [Bone town](beats/06-bone-town)
     * [.] A: Visit, finally acknowledge feelings may be real (okay but are they actually gonna bone)
 7. [o] Seeds of doubt

writing/sawtooth/limerent-object/no-way-2-2.md

@@ -26,7 +26,13 @@ I emailed Jeremy my thoughts on the matter, since he works for the same organiza
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 > One thing that I think I would suggest is that you write this 'journal essay' ASAP so that you have enough time to get your thoughts out of the way. You've mentioned before how easy it is to get caught up in your own thoughts on something while they evolve in the middle of you trying to share them. Write your presentation, then maybe journal about it some, get all the thoughts out of the way that you can so that you're not distracting yourself at the front of the room.
 >
-> Good luck, man!
+> Good luck, buddy!
+>
+> Jeremy
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+No harm in that, I think. I'll get those words down and maybe even spend the night before rehearsing them, just to be safe, and then try and make it as fun as possible for myself, and hopefully that will come across to the audience, as well. Might as well try to turn corporate bullshit into something useful for those who have to put up with it.
 
 [^kaypresentation]: I mean, alongside Kay, but I am *not* giving a presentation on Limerence.
 

writing/sawtooth/limerent-object/no-way-2-3.md

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+The presentation went over quite well, I think