From 621c0ad4562e68dd112fcc90f354869c7d5250a0 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Madison Scott-Clary Date: Wed, 16 Mar 2022 12:20:07 -0700 Subject: [PATCH] update from sparkleup --- writing/post-self/mitzvot/index.md | 9 +++++---- 1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-) diff --git a/writing/post-self/mitzvot/index.md b/writing/post-self/mitzvot/index.md index 02b368b3..4ff7faab 100644 --- a/writing/post-self/mitzvot/index.md +++ b/writing/post-self/mitzvot/index.md @@ -26,8 +26,9 @@ Wherein True Name and May reconcile, and we deal with the problem of the ownersh * original TN collapses, goes catatonic for a good 5 hours while processing * Jonas arrives and explains just what it is he's doing * With the impending change that allows A/V transmission between sys- and phys-side, he thinks that phys-side will expect a much more coherent experience sys-side - * TN isn't being made an example of because she's TN, but because in the context of the *History*, she's visible as an architect, and thus there needs to be a sense that leadership is malleable - * Besides, she's kind of failing now, isn't she? [cue shit-eating politician grin] + * TN isn't being made an example of because she's TN, but because in the context of the *History*, she's visible as an architect, and thus there needs to be a sense that leadership is malleable, especially in light of news from Castor + * Besides, she's kind of failing now, isn't she? [cue shit-eating politician grin] He can assassinate her and she won't do shit about it because that would risk the stability of Lagrange + * He already has most of her stanza on his side. * Meanwhile, May and Ioan have to process what it means that TN now has memories of their relationship * You have the memories, but not the mental framework required to process such (May is empathetic, which TN still struggles with, but now she has the memories, one type of conflict) * How much does individuation matter? @@ -37,8 +38,8 @@ Wherein True Name and May reconcile, and we deal with the problem of the ownersh * ??? * Profit * Second meeting with Jonas, Ioan as amanuensis once more. - * He makes it plain that she's the sacrifice in order to ensure stability - * She can continue living, he's not that cruel, just not as TN anymore (call back to Demma/Yared) + * He makes it plain that she's the sacrifice in order to ensure stability + * She can continue living, he's not that cruel, just not as TN anymore (call back to Demma/Yared) * She works with May to change (into ???) both physically and emotionally, changes name to When I Dream? Or drops out of the clade a la Qoheleth? ### Subplots