From 6220879d04b2b738b5246b71f336b5e135b0401d Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Madison Scott-Clary Date: Sun, 19 Dec 2021 20:05:05 -0800 Subject: [PATCH] update from sparkleup --- writing/post-self/neviim/remote/codrin/007.md | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/writing/post-self/neviim/remote/codrin/007.md b/writing/post-self/neviim/remote/codrin/007.md index a42c799a..0ddbbf16 100644 --- a/writing/post-self/neviim/remote/codrin/007.md +++ b/writing/post-self/neviim/remote/codrin/007.md @@ -108,7 +108,7 @@ Ey guided her into her room and helped her to sit down on the edge of her bed, a Ey took a half step back from the skunk. So hoarse and clouded was her voice that ey couldn't piece together her mood. "I...is that a suggestion or a demand? I'm sorry, True Name. I know how much it means, I just--" -She smiled weakly and shook her head before laying out on her side, facing em. "It is a request from me to you, Codrin, from my clade to yours. Across our two entangled clades." The smile faded as she added, "Not a request, a plea." +She smiled weakly and shook her head before laying out on her side, facing em. "It is a request from me to you, Codrin, from my clade to yours. Across our two entangled clades." The smile faded as she added, "Not...a request. A plea." Ey nodded, struck silent by the sincerity in her voice. Real, actual sincerity. It made em feel bashful. Ey bowed and started to turn back toward the door.