diff --git a/writing/sawtooth/limerent-object/prequel.md b/writing/sawtooth/limerent-object/prequel.md index 8f18db8c..6912109b 100644 --- a/writing/sawtooth/limerent-object/prequel.md +++ b/writing/sawtooth/limerent-object/prequel.md @@ -12,7 +12,7 @@ The story of Dee leaving seminary * [o] Decides to leave * [.] Act 2 * [o] Confesses - * [ ] Prayer + * [.] Prayer * [ ] Mentions leaving to advisor, Father Borenson is not surprised * [ ] Conversation to try and figure out why without asking straight out * [ ] Act 3 @@ -128,4 +128,10 @@ He was not ready yet. Not ready for his penitential *patres nostri*. Not ready t *If you, O Lord, should mark iniquities, Lord, who could stand? But there is forgiveness with you so that you may be revered...* +He didn't even feel ready for this prayer, for this call out to God? What iniquities faced him? He was privileged to be able to attend such a school as this. He was loved by God and the church. He was lucky to have been born with a mind so expansive, a body so healthy. + +Perhaps the iniquities were within. + +*I wait for the Lord, my soul waits, and in His word I hope; my soul waits for the lord more than those who watch the morning, more than those who watch the morning.* +