From 647c09262a6df8e4fc73b52ec51d177afff167cf Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Madison Scott-Clary Date: Fri, 24 Sep 2021 16:20:08 -0700 Subject: [PATCH] update from sparkleup --- writing/post-self/toledot/launch/launch/Codrin-castor/006.md | 2 +- writing/post-self/toledot/launch/launch/Codrin-pollux/006.md | 2 +- writing/post-self/toledot/launch/sys/Ioan/010.md | 2 +- 3 files changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-) diff --git a/writing/post-self/toledot/launch/launch/Codrin-castor/006.md b/writing/post-self/toledot/launch/launch/Codrin-castor/006.md index 7224efa0..da01630c 100644 --- a/writing/post-self/toledot/launch/launch/Codrin-castor/006.md +++ b/writing/post-self/toledot/launch/launch/Codrin-castor/006.md @@ -20,7 +20,7 @@ Codrin grinned and sat on a reasonably comfy --- if slightly ratty --- chair ac "I'm sorry to hear that. I'm curious, in what ways do your stresses differ?" -Codrin tilted his head. "Well, Codrin#Pollux recently had a dinner party with some other Secession-era people. Some from the Council of Eight, and a Yared Zerezghi, who was apparently important phys-side." +Codrin tilted eir head. "Well, Codrin#Pollux recently had a dinner party with some other Secession-era people. Some from the Council of Eight, and a Yared Zerezghi, who was apparently important phys-side." "Ah!" Jonas said, grinning. "How is Yared? Though I guess you weren't there." diff --git a/writing/post-self/toledot/launch/launch/Codrin-pollux/006.md b/writing/post-self/toledot/launch/launch/Codrin-pollux/006.md index 7820f258..d16aa4ed 100644 --- a/writing/post-self/toledot/launch/launch/Codrin-pollux/006.md +++ b/writing/post-self/toledot/launch/launch/Codrin-pollux/006.md @@ -58,7 +58,7 @@ Debarre laughed and raised his glass, "I'll drink to that." *"Then, by all means, let us drink,"* the fox said, and did just that. -The dinner was, as always, delicious: a spicy peanut and bell-pepper soup and a few dishes of beef, vegetables, and lentils. Codrin suspected that it was more for Yared's sake than anyone else's, as he calmed down greatly after having eaten, complimenting the food several times. He even began joining in the conversation towards the end of the meal. +The dinner was, as always, delicious: a spicy peanut and bell-pepper soup and a few dishes of beef, vegetables, and lentils. Codrin suspected that it was more for Yared's sake than anyone else's, as he calmed down greatly after having eaten (and having had a few glasses of wine), complimenting the food several times. He even began joining in the conversation towards the end of the meal. Once plates had been cleared and another bottle of wine opened, user11824 nudged Codrin's arm. "How do you put up with such an insufferably boring life?" diff --git a/writing/post-self/toledot/launch/sys/Ioan/010.md b/writing/post-self/toledot/launch/sys/Ioan/010.md index bcbac051..5dbde4b0 100644 --- a/writing/post-self/toledot/launch/sys/Ioan/010.md +++ b/writing/post-self/toledot/launch/sys/Ioan/010.md @@ -116,7 +116,7 @@ Jonas shook his head, swallowing the last sip of his drink before saying, "There "And the Dreamer Modules?" -For the first time in interview, the first time since ey'd met Jonas --- the first time any Balan had met any Jonas, if Codrin#Castor was correct --- he frowned. "You've been asking plenty of interesting questions, Ioan, but this is the first you've asked that is actively uncomfortable." +For the first time in the interview, the first time since ey'd met Jonas --- the first time any Balan had met any Jonas, if Codrin#Castor was correct --- he frowned. "You've been asking plenty of interesting questions, Ioan, but this is the first you've asked that is actively uncomfortable." Ioan waited.