From 66b7831b358f3ef6f133087a6fcc5419d7a594f6 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Madison Scott-Clary Date: Tue, 14 Jul 2020 14:55:03 -0700 Subject: [PATCH] update from sparkleup --- writing/post-self/qoheleth/RJ/002.md | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/writing/post-self/qoheleth/RJ/002.md b/writing/post-self/qoheleth/RJ/002.md index e4212f90..ebb52b16 100644 --- a/writing/post-self/qoheleth/RJ/002.md +++ b/writing/post-self/qoheleth/RJ/002.md @@ -63,7 +63,7 @@ The skunk rolled her eyes and leaned forward onto her elbows, muzzle resting on Sasha shrugged, nodded, shrugged once more, fiddled with a vcard. No eye contact. -AwDae reached out to take one of her paws in own, black fur on tan mismatched and complementary. Both had opted for mostly hand-like paws, but differences were evident on contact. Where Sasha's fur was an even, silky black marked by white stripes that were a little too sharp, a little too exact, AwDae had labored to construct a version of emself as a fennec fox to exacting detail, down to the point where eir muzzle couldn't even form the two letters that made up eir name offline. +AwDae reached out to take one of her paws in eir own, black fur on tan mismatched and complementary. Both had opted for mostly hand-like paws, but differences were evident on contact. Where Sasha's fur was an even, silky black marked by white stripes that were a little too sharp, a little too exact, AwDae had labored to construct a version of emself as a fennec fox to exacting detail, down to the point where eir muzzle couldn't even form the two letters that made up eir name offline. Exacting, minus perhaps the two-legged-ness, the hands, the humanity around the eyes. Even then, ey had an av free of humanity stashed away somewhere.