From 67e50d66b1a64f39c290ccfbca88455b82ff5149 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Madison Scott-Clary Date: Sun, 11 Feb 2024 21:19:08 -0800 Subject: [PATCH] update from sparkleup --- writing/post-self/idumea/001.md | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/writing/post-self/idumea/001.md b/writing/post-self/idumea/001.md index 0e6fbc7e..85a160c9 100644 --- a/writing/post-self/idumea/001.md +++ b/writing/post-self/idumea/001.md @@ -92,4 +92,4 @@ So the only difference between parties and those days when they all found themse The Woman invites Her Friend over more than any of the other members of the tenth stanza invite others over, except perhaps back when Should We Forget was alive, and Warmth In Fire would come by to give her little gifts and toys, little trinkets and special snacks that she would divvy up and share with the rest of the stanza in little unlabeled envelopes. -But Should We Forget was no longer alive, and now that meant that The Woman, out of all of those who lived together, there on the field, brought over company most often. +But Should We Forget was no longer alive, not since the world turned in on itself and eaten so many of those who lived within, and now that meant that The Woman, out of all of those who lived together, there on the field, brought over company most often.