diff --git a/writing/post-self/index.md b/writing/post-self/index.md
index 30a8afa3..7ce11481 100644
--- a/writing/post-self/index.md
+++ b/writing/post-self/index.md
@@ -23,6 +23,8 @@ In which Maddy mushes together some stories into a post-human romp of ~~a book~~
 * [X] Story: [Assignment](assignment) - 1620
 * [X] Story: [Meeting of one](meeting-of-one) - 2827
 * [o] RPG: ~~[Post-Self in Fate Core](fate)~~ [Post-Self in PbtA](pbta)
+* [X] Flash fiction: [Reading](reading)
+* [.] Story idea: [Pinocchio](pinocchio/index)
 
 ## Other bits
 
@@ -35,8 +37,6 @@ In which Maddy mushes together some stories into a post-human romp of ~~a book~~
 * [ ] Story: [Merge Conflicts with the Truth](truth) (by lorxus)
 * [X] Podcast episode: [April 2022 Q&A](april-2022-q-and-a)
 * [ ] Podcast episode: [The Post-anthropocene](post-anthropocene)
-* [X] Flash fiction: [Reading](reading)
-* [ ] Story idea: [Pinocchio](pinocchio/index)
 
 ## By stanza
 
diff --git a/writing/post-self/pinocchio/index.md b/writing/post-self/pinocchio/index.md
index d9ab158f..bec0d240 100644
--- a/writing/post-self/pinocchio/index.md
+++ b/writing/post-self/pinocchio/index.md
@@ -28,7 +28,10 @@ unpierced by human thought,
 The dreary regions of the dead,
 Where all things are forgot?
 
-— Charles Wesley
+Soon as from earth I go,
+What will become of me?
+
+— Charles Wesley, 1763
 '''
 
 ## Characters
@@ -39,11 +42,11 @@ Where all things are forgot?
 
 ## Outline
 
-* [ ] [001](001) Living forever waiting for time to come/as a real person
-* [ ] [002](002) Saving Geppetto
-* [ ] [003](003) Swallowed by the big fish
-* [ ] [004](004) Pleasure Island
-* [ ] [005](005) Puppet show to prove no strings/earn money for Geppetto
-* [ ] [006](006) Honest John and Gideon the cat
-* [ ] [007](007) Comes to life after a wish
-* [ ] [008](008) Carved from wood
+* [.] [001](001) --- The Woman's life is too real, and she would like that to not be the case / Living forever waiting for time to come/as a real person
+* [ ] [002](002) --- The Woman runs into Her Friend, who is having a very bad day, and shares her idea / Saving Geppetto
+* [ ] [003](003) --- The Woman sees why Her Friend was having a bad day, has a similar bad day / Swallowed by the big fish
+* [ ] [004](004) --- The Woman aims for greater pleasure to try and re-ground herself / Pleasure Island
+* [ ] [005](005) --- The Woman tries being creative with Her Friend to create meaning / Puppet show to prove no strings/earn money for Geppetto
+* [ ] [006](006) --- The Woman muses on the clade and her past, the ways she was taken advantage of /  Honest John and Gideon the cat
+* [ ] [007](007) --- The Woman begins to wish for an escape from the cycle, and Her Friend has feelings / Comes to life after a wish
+* [ ] [008](008) --- The Woman talks with Dry Grass with her idea, who mentions Serene, they talk and she turns into a tree, unclear if she quits / Carved from wood