From 6faa93bee988708fce6aa74482e02b0de11e6ef7 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Madison Scott-Clary Date: Mon, 12 Sep 2022 22:30:06 -0700 Subject: [PATCH] update from sparkleup --- writing/post-self/mitzvot/002.md | 4 ++-- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/writing/post-self/mitzvot/002.md b/writing/post-self/mitzvot/002.md index ac9de5aa..52c71cb5 100644 --- a/writing/post-self/mitzvot/002.md +++ b/writing/post-self/mitzvot/002.md @@ -32,7 +32,7 @@ Ey slouched back against the front row seat ey'd claimed, tapping the end of eir She sat down on the edge of the stage, kicking her feet idly. "It was not in there, no, but I think I will keep it." -Ey grinned and closed eir notebook around eir pen, setting it aside to stand. "Yeah, it's good in there," ey said, leaning forward to give the bridge of the skunk's snout a kiss. May squinted her eyes shut and then scrubbed a paw over her muzzle. "I mean, the whole thing's good. Only note I really had is that you say 'hate' four times in a pretty short span right after you stood up. 'That to hate', then 'truly hate', then 'object of your hatred', and then 'little bit of hatred'." +Ey grinned and closed eir notebook around eir pen, setting it aside to stand. "Yeah, it's good in there," ey said, leaning forward to give the bridge of her snout a kiss. She squinted her eyes shut and then scrubbed a paw over her muzzle. "I mean, the whole thing's good. Only note I really had is that you say 'hate' four times in a pretty short span right after you stood up. 'That to hate', then 'truly hate', then 'object of your hatred', and then 'little bit of hatred'." "Should I make them all different?" @@ -50,7 +50,7 @@ Ey gave her a playful shove with eir shoulder, at which she let out an outsized She rolled her eyes. -Ey let a long silence play then, looking out into the cool darkness of the theater while eir partner summoned up her notebook and scribbled down eir tip from earlier. +Ey let a long silence play then, looking out into the cool darkness of the theater while May summoned up her notebook and scribbled down eir tip from earlier. "Do you really feel that way?"