update from sparkleup

writing/post-self/toledot/index.md

@@ -61,12 +61,12 @@ The secession of the system and launch of the extra-solar system.
             * May Then Thy Name, her role as launch coordinator diminished post-launch, co-authors the story with Ioan as a permanent-yet-evolving mythology, specifically changing small details to make it grandiose, turn it into a new mythology. She also provides the historical background.
         * Launch-side
             * Codrin, Dear, and its partner head off in their sim, having decided not to leave forks behind
-            * Codrin interviewing those who have decided to come with (both seeds are identical in crew and capacity, but will obv diverge further and further apart with time).
+            * Codrin interviewing those who have decided to come with (both seeds are identical in crew and capacity, but will obv diverge further and further apart with time, so maybe interviews with the same people, but different answers).
             * Dear has thoughts on irreversibility of time and lack of connectedness with original system as this new thing, being totally cut off.
             * They're all in love and incredibly gay for each other because I fucking said so.
     * Offline
         * Douglas struggles with being a hermit/launch tech/coordinator but also wanting to talk with Michelle - basically his whole POV is the tech aspect of the launch
-        * de and its collective struggle to get anyone to even want to prevent the launch, but humanity has mostly turned inward and lost interest in exploration, now super conservative, as life is pretty damn hellish outside their heads, starting toward Matrioshka Brain status out of escapism. Uploading is seen as just sort of the thing you do when you get tired enough, if you don't die first, etc. Jealous because upload and lose connection to earth, or remain on earth and never do anything interesting.
+        * de and its collective struggle to get anyone to even want to prevent the launch, but humanity has mostly turned inward and lost interest in exploration, now super conservative, as life is pretty damn hellish outside their heads, leaning heavily on escapism. Uploading is seen as just sort of the thing you do when you get tired enough, if you don't die first, etc. Jealous because upload and lose connection to earth, or remain on earth and never do anything interesting, strange desire to keep the species on the same path.
 
 # Outline
 
@@ -78,7 +78,7 @@ The secession of the system and launch of the extra-solar system.
     * [o] [Secession: sys-side: Michelle](secession/sys/Michelle/001) - Michelle meets with Council of Eight, discusses spending a bunch of reputation to fork; meets up with Jonas and pledges True Name - 2293
     * [o] [Launch: phys-side: Douglas](launch/phys/Douglas/001) - Douglas feels a feel while working on the launch - 1021
     * [o] [Launch: phys-side: Douglas](launch/phys/Douglas/002) - Douglas and May write to each other about the launch - 2722
-    * [o] [Launch: sys-side: Codrin Green](launch/sys/Codrin/001) - The triad tell each other fictional stories around the remnants of the fire of why they left no forks (Dear: incredibly old, heads up to its study, gets tired, falls asleep on a book, this is all a dream; Codrin: being chased by a slavering beast, shut the only exit ey could find; Dear's partner: Dear had started a religion, partner was elected prophet) - 2599
+    * [o] [Launch: sys-side: Codrin Green](launch/sys/Codrin/001) - The triad tell each other fictional stories around the remnants of the fire of why they left no forks - 2599
     * [ ] [Launch: phys-side: de](launch/phys/de/001) - Disappointed that launch went through regardless, walks the station in a daze, thinking backwards from current thought
     * [o] [Secession: phys-side: Yared](secession/phys/Yared/001) - Yared gives a speech on individual rights, then drawn aside by Yosef, out for coffee, tells of secession proposal - 2608
 * [ ] Act II