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@ -91,10 +91,14 @@ There was a moment of vertigo as the mountains fell away, the pond rose, and the
Carter was kneeling on a rumpled bed next to a sobbing fox while a long-haired cat traipsed across her lap to go stand on AwDae's. The fox lifted a paw to stroke through the cat's fur.
"Since then --- tis centuries --- and yet feels shorter than the day," ey said between gasps. "I first surmised the horses heads were towards eternity."
"Since then --- tis centuries --- and yet Feels shorter than the Day," ey said between gasps. "I first surmised the Horses Heads Were towards Eternity ---"
"AwDae?"
"Or perhaps," ey continued, seeming to gain strength from the words. "Distance --- is not the Realm of Fox nor by Relay of Bird Abated..."
"AwDae, can you hear me?"
"Emily Dickinson." Eir laugh was choked. "I am at a loss for images in this end of days: I have sight but cannot see. I build my castle out of words; I cannot stop myself from speaking. And could never come close to the beauty of Dickinson."
The cat bunted her head against the fox's paw, and ey scratched claws gently between her ears. "This is Priscilla."
@ -117,7 +121,7 @@ That impatience melted away. There was no way that Johansson and Caitlin were so
Had it?
Had any time gone by?
Had *any* time gone by?
Carter could feel the maddening influence of this non-place, so detailed in appearance. She could feel the way the dream buffeted her, drew smudging lines away from her mind. And yet, when she focused, she could still feel that cool breeze of the exit behind her. She focused on that.
@ -127,7 +131,7 @@ The fox sat bolt upright. "Sasha? You were talking with her?"
"She contacted me, yes. I wasn't supposed to, but I talked with her and Johansson both."
E subsided. "I'm glad to hear she's alright, then."
Ey subsided. "I'm glad to hear she's alright, then."
Carter frowned. "She isn't, though. She got lost about an hour ago. Or something, I can't tell time in this place. I delved in to pass on information before the police caught up with me, and Debarre and I watched her get lost. That's what led me to try the mirror rig. You should--"
@ -145,7 +149,7 @@ Caitlin was holding RJ's hand, and Johansson was shouting for a doctor.
RJ's eyes were open.
Before she could rejoice, before anyone could stop her, even herself, she delved back in. Delved back in to the 'net, to her home sim, and swiped up an audio broadcast to Sasha, Debarre, Avery, Prakash, Johansson, her PM...everyone she could think of, and began talking. Those that were not listening live would receive a recording.
Before she could rejoice, before anyone could stop her, even herself, she delved back in. Delved back in to the 'net, to her home sim, and swiped up an audio broadcast to Sasha, Debarre, Avery, Prakash, Johansson, her MP...everyone she could think of, and began talking. Those that were not listening live would receive a recording.
"My name is Dr Carter Ramirez, researcher at University College London studying the lost. We have succeeded in waking up one patient, RJ Brewster, and have discovered the mechanism by which individuals get lost. The police and Western Fed agents are here to prevent me from saying this, so if I disconnect, that is why. Do not use the DDR. This is the source of the mechanism as described by Mx Brewster."